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Chapter 28 of Broken Dreams is out for Squires!

I'm still alive.

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you are forgetting he will be king.

Abhishek Kumar

If this is how his "legend" starts with an easy win over bandits, introducing his giant wolf he "controls" and getting blackfish and Arthur Dayne he whole legend in 30-50 years wild be just as insane and impressive as bloodraven .

Lotus92

Awesome

scaife

They'll be great members of his kings guard.

Obiwan

Brynden seeking out Jon makes sense both as a way to blood himself if he knows the Tully's will limit him in the war effort and of course the allure of being part of a new Ravens Teeth. Now Arthur getting dropped into Jon's lap out is very convenient. I get the appeal and it does reinforce the idea that even the best still had to put the work in to draw out that potential.

Tay Rob

Thank you, and wow, Jon got some very famous people in his band. I do like how he got some of the Kingwood's Brotherhood with him. Plus a few of the Raventeeth, too. I can't wait to see how people will react to Jon dealing with the bandits with ease. Great job as always, and I can't wait to see what happens next.

FallenMetalGod

Damn! Jon forming himself quite the group! Brynden Tully AND Arthur Dayne?? Doesn’t get much more OP

Mandragoran

Great chapter bro! Loving the squad so far, wasn’t expecting to see Arthur Dayne and I’m assuming Brynden Tully join Jon’s group lmao. Can’t wait for the day Jon and Tywin meet.

Lesion

This is getting better and better. Arthur Dayne as a page? Looking forward to more.

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