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Chapter 26 of Broken Dreams is out for Squires!

I wasn't feeling too well the past week; I'm somewhat better now. Furthermore, chapter 25 is edited and smoothed out, and should read better. Anyway, the chapter is late, but it's here:

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The Google Docs link is temporary until it leaks, as always.

Comments

Passando aqui pra deixar de ser um leitor fantasma.

Guylherme Rhuan

Amazing chapter! Everything I hoped for and more in their first meeting. Can’t wait to see the reactions to Dark Sister

MaximaRegina

Great chapter. Now to see Aegon's reaction. Happy writing πŸ™Œ

Xavier

Excellent chapter. It feels like the introduction of Jon to the plot in Kingslanding could have very subtle but dynamic impact. Hopefully it will make things easier to write by opening up more options in how things move forward and not complicate things too much.

John Pinson

Thank you, and I have to say I like how both Rhaella and Jon were able to play off each other for a single moment. However, the reveal of Dark Sister was grand, especially for how Jon will learn about Rhaella's greensight ability. Great job as always, and I can't wait to see Aegon's reaction to Dark Sister being found.

FallenMetalGod

Wooohooo! Great chapter!

Mandragoran

Excellent. Looking forward to the next one.

Perraup

Awesome chapter. Cant wait to see the courts reaction to "bloodravens' get". Me thinks King Aegon is gonna have to fire his new hand all too soon. Especially when hes probably in the up and up of how his son somehow knew where to find Jon and co.

Archimedes

And tyftc!

suspicious

FINALLLYY - THIS WAIT WAS WORSE THEN NNN.

suspicious

Yes!!! It finally happened! The first sight exchanged, the first words spoken. Love is in the air, the game is afoot. The ship is seaworthy. The way Darklyn was dealt with was funny but believable.

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