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Chapter 21 of Broken Dreams is out for Squires!

This chapter did not turn out as I expected, though that might have been my mood when I wrote it. I like it, but I'm not entirely happy, so feel free to lemme know what you think.

Without further ado:

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Gladiusx

Did Rhaella get all the pieces back?

avog16

Oh wow....the timeline is so different now. Also damn Dorne seems to always have to lose someone to Targ messes even in an altered timeline...

Simplexity

Thank you, and I am glad that Rhaella was able to put herself together, but also learn about Blackfyre's plans. Jon seemed to help her out, which is excellent. I do hope that Jon somehow finds Blackfyre if he decides to go to war, claiming the legendary sword. Great job as always, and I can't wait to see what happens next.

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