Chapter 75 of Shrouded Destiny (SD) is out for Squires!
Added 2024-08-05 03:30:38 +0000 UTCAnother thick chapter. On a side note, I fucking hate the Tetanus shot, don't be like me and avoid stepping on rusty nails, folks!
Anyway, this, along with the previous and possibly the next two chapters are one of the most action packed chapters I have. A lot of turning points happen in a relatively short period of time, and while I want to cram everything into a single chapter, it wouldn't do it justice. I legit struggle to choose which plot to unwrap first, because so many things are happening at the same time.
Anyway, I believe I'm delivering very well on my promise to keeping making the shitshow worse.
That being said, you can read the previous chapters in the collection.
Comments
Oh, I will deffo fix that once I finish the CoF chapter. Tracking all the characters does get challenging at times. Also, thanks for the feedback. I do try to do better and keep improving as a writer, so all critique is welcomed.
Gladiusx
2024-08-15 20:34:34 +0000 UTCThe duel was such a treat to read, easily understood, you have come a long way as a writer, action scenes, dialogue, all the damm names to keep track of, yummy yummy, this world feels enormous and lived in and ofcourse Garlan is Ace, not surprising. , a tiny nitpick, Brienne was in Kingslanding guarding Renly in the previous chapter, the Bulwer kingsguards one and now shes all the way in the marches? Que paso? " Bulwer was in no mood for sparring so after leaving Renly in Briennes overly large hands..." paraphrasing
Daniel Persson
2024-08-15 13:14:42 +0000 UTCI am on my hands and knees begging for a Robb chapter next week, anyway great chapter as always
Matthew DeLaura
2024-08-05 21:39:24 +0000 UTCThat Myrish lady was ready to risk it all for a night with Ned! I know Cat would be fuming. Garlan really said βIβm bringing honor BACKβ and he meant it! Farewell to Brienne and the Blackfish π My jaw dropped at the wildfire somehow letting Renly into the city. Joffrey flaming the fires of conflict with the maesters made me laugh because of COURSE he did! I have a feeling the citadel is going to have some explaining to do.. Did Illyrio take Margaery in hopes of snagging a better alliance for βAegonβ?
Happy
2024-08-05 05:56:00 +0000 UTC
