Worlds Apart - Remastered
Added 2020-07-01 23:54:26 +0000 UTCHere's the first 2500 words of the re-edit of my old story Worlds Apart. Much like Pinwheel, I feel this one merits a complete overhaul, so I'll be rewriting it from scratch while I use the original document as a reference. This is both to get the story ready for a retail release, and also to familiarize myself with the characters again before I start work on the sequel, which is up next.
https://pastebin.com/5wusrLG9
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Editing is finished! I'll make the Ebook tomorrow.
Snekguy
2020-08-13 03:51:51 +0000 UTCAnother 10,000 words edited, from 'They paid their bill and left the diner' to "I'll be a good girl while I'm on Earth."
Snekguy
2020-08-11 22:16:19 +0000 UTC17,000 words edited, from Chapter 4 to 'I want to show you something'
Snekguy
2020-08-11 03:47:21 +0000 UTCThe first 20,000 words are edited, chapters 1 to 4.
Snekguy
2020-08-09 23:44:46 +0000 UTCGot pretty carried away working on the website today, so I'll begin editing tomorrow.
Snekguy
2020-08-09 02:24:02 +0000 UTCGood to hear, I'll wait for the ePub before reading.
Robert Gilbert
2020-08-07 20:15:12 +0000 UTCFinished! Added a bit of an epilogue to the ending, raising the final word count to 64k, which is double the length of the original. I'm going to take a day off tomorrow to work on some stuff related to the website, then I'll start the editing process. Should take about four days.
Snekguy
2020-08-06 22:13:46 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “I'm yours, Liz,”
Snekguy
2020-08-06 00:58:27 +0000 UTCI have a doctor's appointment early tomorrow, and I spent most the day talking to artists, so I'm going to call it there for today. As you can see below, we got the newest spaceship scene finished, and the artist Honovy is beginning work on the Rask Rebellion cover tomorrow, so I'll hopefully have some WIPs to show you guys soon. I'm also in touch with LevelViolet who will hopefully be working on the Worlds Apart cover if things pan out. I'll resume updates as normal tomorrow, it shouldn't take more than one or two more to finish up.
Snekguy
2020-08-04 21:39:32 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'Jamie felt her grip around his waist tighten'
Snekguy
2020-08-04 01:45:58 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'Jamie crawled his way up onto the bed'
Snekguy
2020-08-02 22:31:13 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'She loosed a long sigh as Jamie resumed his work'
Snekguy
2020-08-02 03:02:42 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “That's the idea,”
Snekguy
2020-08-01 01:01:13 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'It was a futile endeavor'
Snekguy
2020-07-31 00:17:51 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “Never been to the spaceport, Jamie?”
Snekguy
2020-07-29 23:26:59 +0000 UTCI was pretty busy with IRL stuff today, so I took a semi-day off to respond to some comments and emails, deal with some maintenance stuff on the various sites, etc.
Snekguy
2020-07-28 23:24:27 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “You could try a low-alcohol beer, maybe,”
Snekguy
2020-07-28 01:00:53 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'They found a grassy embankment' Looks like Pastebin is fixed now.
Snekguy
2020-07-27 01:17:26 +0000 UTCI’ve emailed Pastebin and they’ve replied saying the Dev Team is aware and currently finding a solution.
Robert Gilbert
2020-07-26 06:15:21 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'Liz lifted one of the controllers' The formatting on Pastebin still seems all fucked up, and I don't have any updates on what the hell is going on with the site, so just hit the 'download' button over to the top right of the page to download the txt file with its proper formatting intact.
Snekguy
2020-07-26 03:08:14 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'The café had a nice view of the city' Looks like the formatting on Pastebin is all fucked right now, so once again, here's the txt file: https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/528342871259217930/736381943343480862/Worlds_Apart_-_Remastered.txt
Snekguy
2020-07-25 00:39:25 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'They were too small for Liz to sit on'
Snekguy
2020-07-24 03:46:04 +0000 UTCSorry to hear that, hope you get better. Explains why you hadn't replied to my last message :P
Robert Gilbert
2020-07-22 18:39:10 +0000 UTCIt's migraine time, so probably no update today.
Snekguy
2020-07-22 15:31:18 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'They stopped as a shoal of silvery fish glided above the tunnel'
Snekguy
2020-07-21 23:43:00 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “I don’t know if things can go back to the way they were before,”
Snekguy
2020-07-20 21:00:14 +0000 UTC1600 word update, new content at 'She zipped up her jacket and sat back down' Little short of the mark today because I lost a few hours dealing with the Wiki situation.
Snekguy
2020-07-20 00:41:35 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “How do they even survive?”
Snekguy
2020-07-18 20:53:48 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'He could ask her all of the questions he wanted tomorrow.'
Snekguy
2020-07-17 21:00:27 +0000 UTCSo excited! Can't wait to check it out when it's finished.
E. B. Perry
2020-07-17 05:02:21 +0000 UTC2500 word update, new content at “Liz? Is that you?”
Snekguy
2020-07-16 20:27:04 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'She was practiced'
Snekguy
2020-07-16 00:41:30 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'He knew he was heading in the right direction'
Snekguy
2020-07-14 22:52:15 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'The next step was to get in touch with Bradley’s contact at the UNN'
Snekguy
2020-07-14 01:26:25 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'Jamie pushed his way through the throngs of people'
Snekguy
2020-07-13 01:08:30 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'Jamie awoke to bright sunlight'
Snekguy
2020-07-12 00:24:15 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'She sank her teeth into his shoulder'
Snekguy
2020-07-11 00:34:10 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'She took the initiative'
Snekguy
2020-07-09 22:39:22 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'His eyes wandered down between her legs'
Snekguy
2020-07-08 22:38:30 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at “Feels good,”
Snekguy
2020-07-07 22:00:02 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'After briefly checking that his parents were indeed at work'
Snekguy
2020-07-06 23:39:58 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'Another day passed without any sign of Liz'
Snekguy
2020-07-05 23:42:18 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'Chapter 2'
Snekguy
2020-07-04 23:23:45 +0000 UTCRight back at you.
Snekguy
2020-07-04 01:07:43 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'He considered for a moment'
Snekguy
2020-07-04 01:07:02 +0000 UTCYou are awesome.
Giggles fun time
2020-07-03 17:14:45 +0000 UTC2000 word update, new content at 'They left the college campus'
Snekguy
2020-07-03 01:21:47 +0000 UTC
