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Hot Kofe

https://pastebin.com/KjYM4TB8

Here's the first 7000 words of a thing I've been writing as a side project, in which a Polar is spurned by her human love interest and makes it her mission to get into his pants by any means necessary.

I'm only adding updates to this when I have the time and motivation to work on it, as I'm prioritizing daily updates on Return to Krell. 

Comments

How many chapters is the sex scene?

Ezekiel Paul

Finished! Everything is chaptered and edited, I'll make the Ebook tomorrow.

Snekguy

Another 25k words are edited, from chapter 6 to "I bet I could make you sing like a bird". I'll probably need to find a way to break up that massive sex scene into several different chapters.

Snekguy

Really looking forward to reading the chapterised Ebook!

Terminal_Boy

The first 30k words are edited, up to chapter 6.

Snekguy

2500 word update, FINISHED! The final word count is a hair over 70k. Now on to the editing and chaptering, which should take between three and four days. I'll post daily updates with my progress. Once that's done I'll make an Ebook and get back to work on GJ2. Fun fact, this story features the longest sex scene I've ever written at 25,000 words. Hopefully it's as fun to read as it was to write, and is properly paced, and isn't a tedious slog...

Snekguy

2000 word update

Snekguy

2000 word update

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2000 word update

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Snekguy

"bringing her to competition." Did you mean bringing her to completion?

Ezekiel Paul

2000 word update

Snekguy

*clicks link* *blink blink* *refreshes* Are you sure you remembered to hit save?

Ezekiel Paul

2000 word update

Snekguy

2000 word update

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2000 word update

Snekguy

I was wondering if that was going to be a challenge. Some scenes are easier to just write through.

Ezekiel Paul

2000 word update, I'm probably going to power through and get Kofe finished before I resume work on GJ2, as switching between Kofe's lovemaking and Vapula's sadism is going to fry my brain.

Snekguy

This was adorable and sweet. Beautiful work

SketchyWarrior

4200 word update, I think I got it down, let me know what you think!

Snekguy

Not a problem, thanks for the heads up!

Ezekiel Paul

I wrote 2000 words today, but after several rewrites I'm not happy with where the big romance scene is, so I'm gonna do some more work on it and deliver a double update tomorrow.

Snekguy

2000 word update

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Snekguy

This update may have indirectly inspired the next fan-work I want to write in the Pinweel universe. Congrats.

Ezekiel Paul

2000 word update

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2000 word update

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2000 word update

Snekguy

I really like this update for how much it caught me off guard.

Ezekiel Paul

2000 word update

Snekguy

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2000 word update

Snekguy

I know this is your side project, but I'm chomping at the bit to see this one to completion at this point.

Ezekiel Paul

2500 word update

Snekguy

10 degrees Celsius? That's warmer than I would have expected.

Ezekiel Paul

2500 word update

Snekguy

It's easy to fantasize, less easy to produce a porno lol

You ever thought of just turning at least one of these stories into a live action video? You'd make a killing with this niche market!

Jack Fables

4000 word update

Snekguy

4500 word update?! Jesus mang! Workin overtime!

AnimeFem

4500 word update

Snekguy

Very excited for this one!! Can't wait!

Couldn't agree more.

AnimeFem

Very promising start. I've always felt as though your side stories (the ones that aren't too attached to the overall story arch of the pinwheel saga) have been some of your best work. They allow you to write whatever you want without having to worry about possible story consequences and I think this creative freedom is shown in the increased quality of the work. Can't wait to read the finished product!

Iron Wolves? Story wirting? I wanna see 0.0

AnimeFem

I am intrigued and curious to see where this goes, Also, finally back on campus and able to resume working on Iron Wolves.

SketchyWarrior

Hi I'm Shiny Umbreon and this is my favorite story on the citadel.

Shiny Umbreon

You are not one to disappoint my man! Another interesting story?? On a roll.

AnimeFem


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