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Here's the first 2000 words of a new story I'm writing, which is a sequel to 'Splashdown'. 

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Yep, more coming soon!

Snekguy

Editing and chaptering is finished, I'll have an Ebook ready shortly.

Snekguy

You're spitting these stories out left and right! Love your work, I'm sure you have something else up your sleeve as always. I love surprises.

AnimeFem

Chapters 1-5 are edited, I'm about half way done.

Snekguy

Really excellent story, loved it start to finish.

Kami-Kaze

Final update, finished! Editing should take two days, and then I'll make the Ebook.

Snekguy

Nice amigo. Very nice. Also, I've been making a good chunk of progress on Iron Wolves so I'll update it once im home.

SketchyWarrior

2500 word update

Snekguy

No worries. It's the holidays, that means take a holiday.

Kami-Kaze

Didn't get enough done for an update today due to holiday-related business. I'll see what I can do for tomorrow.

Snekguy

Nice

SketchyWarrior

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Snekguy

I've not found much time to work on it lately, it's still in the works but it will be a while before I have anything new to show. It looks like it will take up the equivalent of about four novels worth of time in the writing alone, so it may be a while yet.

Snekguy

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Snekguy

Is the game you talked about still in progress or is it on the backburner?

Jack Fables

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Snekguy

Cool, I'm relieved that you guys like the direction I'm taking it in.

Snekguy

Dig it. Being able to concentrate on depth is the best thing about these later stories where you don't have to hold everyone's hand through introducing stuff. This is cool - like Rig Runner, all about exploring those other dimensions.

Sorfin7

I liked it. It shows a deeper side to the Borealans, that being top dog isnt always the best way forward. On a similar note, how are you enjoying Iron Wolves so far?

SketchyWarrior

2000 word update, bit of a tentative one today, I'm not sure if this is the right direction to take Zhari's character but I'll put it out there and you guys can let me know what you think. I can always change it if necessary.

Snekguy

I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Snekguy

Generally not into male dominant stories, so serious kudos for somehow making Zhari and McGregor my favorite couple.

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Snekguy

Just got around to reading this, and I'm liking it. I now want to see how Colour Sergeant Bourne from 'Zulu' would handle a Borealan. "Now behave yourself, young lady!"

Scott Morrison

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Snekguy

Finals are over so Im getting back to Iron Wolves.

SketchyWarrior

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Snekguy

You're about to hate me, but two lines above the uncuffing she's 'opening her arms to him'.

Kami-Kaze

I'm hoping that this will be kind of a realization for Zhari that she prefers being a subordinate, I want to show that being an Alpha is stressful and taxing. Of course McGregor is pretty much the only person who can provide that for her, due to their unusual circumstances.

Snekguy

2000 word update, also fixed a continuity error in a prior scene and corrected a misspelling.

Snekguy

As a minor note, unless I missed something, there wasn't a point where she was uncuffed to hug him?

Kami-Kaze

I dig that you've dipped into some emotional attachment more explicitly. It's been hinted at, but for a while it seemed that the relationship was purely hierarchical / carnal...not that that's bad - but it felt a little flat to me.

Sorfin7

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Snekguy

My only reaction to all this is 'yeeeeeees'.

Kami-Kaze

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Snekguy

Zulus attack Fight back to back

SketchyWarrior

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Snekguy

I am excited

SketchyWarrior

New story hype.

Kami-Kaze


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