Splashdown V2.0
Added 2017-12-01 00:15:28 +0000 UTC'A landing craft on a mission to a remote jungle planet is shot down, the only survivors are the reluctant human pilot, and a wounded Borealan warrior. To his dismay she declares her intentions to complete their mission, if he will give his help willingly or otherwise. Forced to cooperate, the two must overcome their differences if they want to survive.'
I thought that I should re-read Splashdown today, in order to re-familiarize myself with the characters before I started writing the sequel.
I decided to start re-editing it too, to bring it up to speed with my more recent work. I had been planning to do that for all of my older stories eventually, and now seemed like a good time.
Problem is, it required way more work than I had anticipated. As well as the improvements to grammar and punctuation, it needed a lot of straight up rewrites in a lot of places.
I got the whole thing done today. It needs another once-over to make sure there are no errors, but it should be a far better reading experience now.
I'll make an Ebook tomorrow, and of course I'll start the sequel.
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I'll try to alternate between new content and editing the old stories. Fineprint will probably take me about four days to edit.
Snekguy
2017-12-01 00:35:15 +0000 UTCFineprint rewooooork
Shiny Umbreon
2017-12-01 00:17:21 +0000 UTC