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Out-of-Placers #128: Journal Entry #1

The first of many, if Kass wants to keep those sweet company benefits to rolling in

Out-of-Placers #128: Journal Entry #1

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Forget the old T pose... This is the new T pose! Just gotta grow a second pair of legs.

So very very insightful into the sad life of Kass who just wishes she was human and a dude again. Poor thing

Jaws18301

Way to get your act together, Kass! I get that you have to walk hunched over and sway his tail and all. But... do you have to slaver? You don't really have to slaver, do you? Try to be graceful in the way you move your mid-body legs and hold your freakishly long neck and tail and STOP THAT TWITCHING.

Thorin N. Tatge

Bet this felt good being finally able to write about a chunk of lore that you’ve had locked in your skull for a while now, huh? :3

Scarletmenace

I think the thing I love the most about this is just how annoyed he is with the eyewhiskers. Like, he's clearly annoyed with everything else, but he at least can put that to the side for a moment and actually think about what's going on. But then you have those goddamn eyewhiskers - the sheer rage cannot be contained in his small yinglet body.

Vicroc4

I wonder if Ran could provide some sort of counterweights to allow Kass to resume the posture he desires. Might be worth seeing.

Thomas Halpin

This was very well done. I strongly get the impression of a descent into helpless anger as Kass proceeds with the notes and begins to dwell on his situation. Also a good mix of thought, genuine annoyance, and prejudice. Here's hoping that eating enough oysters gives him super powers, or at least provides a vital nutrient that slows their dreadfully fast aging process.

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Vet

I hope I am not picking at the character, but I wonder if the heavy tail would allow Yinglets to orient themselves in free-fall. I seem to remember some lizards use their tails that way. The Yinglet air force might eventually incorporate a paratrooper division. What the heck, why not?

Estragon

Yes, I know how upset it makes you :V

Wat

Kass thought about it, but decided against going through with it

Val Salia

I unfortunately can't stop you from making Kass look all sorts of weird stuff like "cool" or "happy" in your work *Shake fist*

Val Salia

Wow, zhis squares up beautifully wizh how I conceived za life-experiences of ze Avian characters in za sci-fi novel I was writing. Bozh Ran and Viracroix will be very pleased indeed! Yet zhere is one great uncompleted point in za report; did Kass eat za snail?

Zhe Missing Drake

At least that's how I'll draw her in all my fanart :B

Wat

I think Kass is pretty cool, maybe that's just me though. . . I think she's just not accepted her form enough to recognize how cool she can be, hell she probably doesn't even think of herself as a she right now. But just maybe, one day, she'll be comfortable enough with herself to accept what she is an take control with it, and over time her coolness will come out until she's a spear wielding badass just like all those watlets :V

Wat

That's 'cos our brains aren't tuned to it! Our brains are amazingly plastic and given time and a lack of normal 180Β° stimulus it would soon seem almost like second nature. Did you know, some physiologists did an experiment getting volunteers to wear glasses that inverted their vision. It took time, but eventually they adapted - and were almost totally thrown off when they removed them at the end!

Richard Weir

Turn your FOV to 200 degrees in an FPS game and you might not be!

Val Salia

Yeah but Kass isn't a cool yinglet is she

Val Salia

...uation

Val Salia

There will be more!

Val Salia

When he has time to think and piece together a nice-sounding sentence, yes!

Val Salia

Glad a lotta people enjoy these! It's really nice having a readerbase that isn't turned off by the occasional text dump like this. Just the same, I try and keep this info such that it isn't *required* in order to follow the story.

Val Salia

Yes, but if I just dumped all the lore that's in my head, the comic would be like 100 pages of dense fact walls, so better to let it drip out by bit like this.

Val Salia

Glad you did! I've been wanting to write this page for a while now.

Val Salia

Doing good, Kass. Also, man, am I jealous of that field of vision.

Merle Blue

But not tidy

Val Salia

A lot at once!

Val Salia

It better be, Kass got debts to pay

Val Salia

He could stand up a bit more straight if he was a cooler yinglet that wasn't all derpy and understood tail counterbalance and proper stances, or just carried a rad spear like those cool watlets.

Wat

A well written personal evaluation there Kass. Research will appreciate the eval.

Vet

Kass' drawings are amazing, and I want more. I bet everyone at the scav colony would commission him. I'd join the 7 oyster tier for his patreon.

ArcadeDragon

Well he certainly expresses himself better than any Yinglet. That we know of at least. (By the way this is awesome.)

VGR

Awwww yeaaah, I love how thought out these are <3 World building is so good, unf

Wing Dancer

This is good. I really enjoyed reading it. :D

Ngrasta

Neat!

Max Last

Yay, more LOREEEE

ZBL

That's a lot of interesting information.

UrbanDragon


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