Shenanigans - WIP #2
Added 2021-12-26 20:28:17 +0000 UTCMore pages will be added over the coming week.
UPDATE 12/31: Storyboards are done. I’ll start posting full size drawings next week.
Comments
This is really dang fun. I like the juxtaposition between this iteration of the stallion and his human loofah and the sketches that inspired it; there’s a nice comedic timing to that last storyboard that I really like; and the dialogue we have is ambiguous on where things are go but not so much that we’re lost, nice way to keep us hooked. Also really like Phillip’s sort of hoof fingernails, I’ve kind of struggled with those those should look and you did it handily. That said, I do have some questions; is this process exfoliating for Eli just as it is for Phillip? Does Phillip actually have a loofah and he just decided that he needed Eli to get over it being missing? Does Eli actually like the ass like Phillip implies? And where did Eli’s clothing go? All questions that may or may not be answered. Either way, this was a nice way to cap off my day.
Taikowolf
2022-01-01 02:11:49 +0000 UTCI love how squishy you max your small guys!
Wilson Phant
2021-12-31 22:16:03 +0000 UTCHeh, this is a great start; setting up bits and pieces that may come into effect later, and getting into their relationship right off the bat. Phillip is able to afford more than his apparent means, Eli trusts him enough to do requests like this, and Phillip has an affectionate nickname…or at least that’s the read I got from the first two pages. Really looking forward to seeing where this goes~
Taikowolf
2021-12-28 01:09:49 +0000 UTC
