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Hi, please talk about what you do and don't like about this character.

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She's a punk and a partyer, pulling people into her adventures like breaking into an abandoned warehouse to party in it, and then set up comfy conditions for squatters in it later on with the people who celebrated in it before.

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Yush, she will look good with enlargement, but that'll come at some point. Thanks for horse feedback!

Snao

okidoki! Feedback on horse processed.

Snao

I personally have never liked hats on anthro's that have upright ears, unless they are obviously designed to have holes in them, but I'm probably just being nitpicky.

RiverWillows

She looks wonderful! Def agree she'd look good with the bottom boobs a bit bigger tho, let em smother her groin a bit. That being said, she'd definitely look better with everything bigger too!

WulfesHeafod

I'd love to see her power at maximum. 💦💦

Luca 'Renee' Shoal

Awesome! Will we see any pictures of her growing soon?

Elysia

Yep, she's an overachiever.

Snao

Up to her ears at 50%? Geez

Luca 'Renee' Shoal

You would love her!!

Snao

Thanks for comment on horse! :0

Snao

Yeah, she's quite a grower.

Snao

I love her.

Fenoxo Fenfen

I like the thicker bottom lip, maybe both lips be thick? Not the biggest fan of multiboob but hey, it's your art! ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Jo

I think she's great! Only thing I think is wrong is that her balls are much too small for the size of her cock. They need a few more litres of GRO pumped into them. Horses should have the biggest equipment! Also, what does the 50% mean? Is her cock only half as big as it usually is?

Elysia

Man there's a Lot of feedback, lmao. Maybe you should make her a taller friend, also a horse herm, but more of a bouncer role and only one set of boobs.

J S

Needs bigger HOOFS. Big enough to be mistaken for the toes of Boots. Also a little ambigious if I'm looking at her sheath or belly button.

Vosyl

thank, hopefully the next version will be acceptable

Snao

ye ye

Snao

She's cute, looks a little sketchy though... Hoping for a completed picture ^_^

Chimera

Outfit needs work as other people have said but I quite like it on the whole, nice smile especially.

Norman A. Letterman

adkjlkf. haha dangit

Snao

It's funny cause I have the exact opposite view. It only really works for me if they are of a different size.

Norman A. Letterman

While I like the design as is beyond a couple details- maybe ditching the pearl necklace and making the hat a bit longer MAYBE- I don't think having it smother the groin would inherently be a bad thing, either. Mostly hidden by her own boobs, and then gets erect and has the thing poking out from within.

Kaotic Machine

Thank you for your comments on this large horse! :0

Snao

I really like everything you did for the head, the ears, the face, how the hat pushes her hair to cover her eyes. I'm personally not a fan of multi-boob, but it's a very niche market so feel free to tackle it for the people that do like it (maybe the bottom set should be bigger?) and the cloak thing that sits on the tail seems a bit out of place to me.

Keanan Clare

yaaa

Snao

I'm worried about having to change the body type to prevent the boob from smothering the groin.

Snao

More spikes, belts (cock belt?) fishnets, etc.

Lluxury

Multiboob where the different rows are different sizes has always looked completely idiotic to me. And it doesn't make any sense. All the rows should be the same size.

Fake Name

Jeez, Snao. I like everything about her. She is an uncommon ticker of boxes. I like the ears; the beanie with the ears poking through; the hair mirroring the beanie, and I've the eyes. I like her horsey nose, and the white patch that covers it. I like her broad shoulders and erect but casual posture. I think the size and tautness of her upper breasts is perfectly suited to her, and I think her lower breasts are a wonderful size for gentle fondling and they're at a great position for expansion and pushing the upper set higher. Her hips are nice and wide, and her hands and arms are big and strong. Her tail is gorgeously floofy, and I'm a big fan of hooves any day of the week. Her crotch area is a wee bit confusing in this pic though. I honestly can't tell whether that's her belly or a sheath poking out the top of her pants. I assume it's a belly, but I am hugely tempted by the idea that that bulge across the front of her pants is a dick, with a second dick held in reserve with a different enough physiology that they get erect in different ways. Having her as an urban adventurer with a good heart, encouraging people to have fun and help others is icing on an already hugely attractive cake.

aabsurdity

Yahhh I gotta come up with actual clothes for her haha

Snao

I think some more punkishness to her outfit would benefit her

Lluxury

Hello, friend. I think the character is more or less locked in at this point. It seems like people enjoy the character as-is.

Snao

Thank you for your feedback on the horse

Snao

I like the physical design and the hair; not a huge fan of the costume and the tail looks detached.

Dr. Supersocks

multi is fine also. just go with the flow and trust your instincts! ^^ b

Mecha Kaiju X

Well, not to belabor it too much, but that is waht this is, and the poll Im running on Twitter is pro-multi

Snao

No worries! might be good to have a poll later on XD

Mecha Kaiju X

Sorry, this multiboob thing has been really really divided ;w;

Snao

multi-boob is the only distracting thing but she would be a great candidate for all kinds of inflation :3

Mecha Kaiju X

fair enough lol

Mecha Kaiju X

Prolly will basically be this version of her!

Snao

Too complex

Snao

Not a fan of the multi-boob, but I do love the assets and I think a hyper vag version or a hyper muscled version would be fantastic. :D

Pyrohawk

i think she could have them sometimes maybe (via transformation from "Gro cola" or some other effect) but her default is two

Mecha Kaiju X

Yae, I got some comments on wanting them to be of equal size.

Snao

something I wanna say, I love how the multiboobs are relatively small. lots of furries just make them all so big it's just silly

Lauren Hahn

Hghhhhn. Everyone's so torn on the multi-boobs!!!!!

Snao

Like: big titty horse gurlz, massive wang & balls, punkish characters with hair covering their eyes. Dislike: quadboobies are distracting, two are ideal. Overall good character just needs some minor fixes/upgrades :3

Mecha Kaiju X

On that note: I will prolly lose the pearl necklace and replace it with something else like designed charms. Ya it'll be more modern-ish than old punk. And idk either, but I guess the answer is gonna be multi-boobs because Im getting less pushback on it after asking.

Snao

Oh, are we talking old school metal punk or electro neon punk? I personally prefer the neon style (almost 80's vibe) that's being growing. Also, the pearl necklace does kinda say she's might be kinda rich. Probably gets out of bail pretty easy. Either that, or she "bribes" the police. What else... I like to see eyes, but the bangs style works fine; good detail on the muscles, (maybe a touch buffer, but that's just my preference) good proportions on the balls/dick ratio though maybe a little less on the dick, but obvious that's variable, heheh. But the biggest question- Which is better: a second set of awesome tits or a nice chiseled abdomen? I never have an answer for that, lol.

J S

Im prolly committed to the horse dong on this here particular character

Snao

Yahhh, the multiboobs are incredibly divisive but I think Im gonna stick with them at this point unless people really really come to hate it.

Snao

do like: the hair covering the eyes!! the big ol balls!! quadtitties! don't like? horsedick. I think human dicks are better

Lauren Hahn

pfffff

Snao

Ya, standard nipples

Snao

The heads overall fantastic, accessories suit the character and I love the long bangs. Lips could maybe be a tad bigger but probably fine in context with everything else. Not personally a fan of the second row of tits but they're whatever. Kinda wish there was some dick bulge there, but the balls are goddamn perfect. I'm just gonna assume there's a 10/10 booty back there because imo that's key to the punk look, along with the "smaller" tits compared to your other hyper work. Lastly, is that the faint outline of a nip piercing I see? Byootiful. Overall one of my recent favourites, went a bit more ham on the critique than intended but hey you're the one who asked ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Docperian

Hehe. All jokes aside, I do like the character design and her background. She could be fun.

Malhavoc

I like that she is tall and kinda stronk and a benefit to society. Also the hair. I do not like the apparent fact that her nips are not dicks.

Ghostflame

Thanks for your feedback on the horse of course!

Snao

Okidoki, I'll prolly stick with it then.

Snao

Multiboob Troublemaker that has an affinity for partying and heckling police? I'm in love, sign me the fuck up <3

Noran

actually really love it tbh, not typically my thing but it just feels right on this lady? hard to explain, the anatomy fits her aesthetic super perfect. vice/versa.

willowbinder

How much do ya like the multiboob, because I've gotten a lot of pushback on that. ;w; :sweat_drops:

Snao

huge troublemaker, hugerer assets. huge love for this horsey. huge questions about the pop/punk fashion world that caters to multiboob girls. huge.

willowbinder

Shame, still love some big equines either way.

Sumica

Further comments: I want her to be frens with my punk oc

BCR

I c I c

Snao

Plush mare bits may not be in the cards for *this particular* acharacter

Snao

Love me some equine. Hope to see more of her especially some plush mare bits.

Sumica

What I like: everything What I don’t like: nothing Other feedback: needs more piercings, like maybe a lip one or something

BCR

Also looks like she could do with some breast implants

Drillkiller

I see I see. :0 I'll prolly include such a pierce.

Snao

haha oh jeez. Well thanks for chat on horse

Snao

:0 Well then ok. Thx for opinions on horse

Snao

Yaaa, Ive gotten quite a few comments on the multiboob being kinda too busy so I'll prolly give it upppp

Snao

Thanks for your feedbak on hors

Snao

Yase, but cartoon physics are protective. '3'

Snao

okidokes :0

Snao

I'm just not that keen on horses/ponies. Proportions and style wise I would probably like her otherwise.

Straw

Ya, mebbe different power levels of erection or something

Snao

I like practically everything about her. Though I think that, being a horse, she could be more of a "grower" than a "shower".

Nechrom

I feel like if she's going to be starting trouble with the police she needs to better protect her balls.

RHüz

I like most of her. The hugemongous penis is more than I care for but not particularly detracting. Solid A-. ;p

Webster Leone

I would say the quad tits substract from it. I enjoy multiboob, but sometimes it doesn't work. The rest is lovely though.

Regal

Love: Multiboob <3++++, horsey bits (all of them, dick+++, hooves++, ears++, snoot+ the floof++, the hair and beanie. Don't love: That you haven't inked this yet. :P Even for a sketch the hooves are pretty rough. Were you waffling on whether to include them? Cute character all in all, good story, pretty positive!

vanquishedValiant

Could use more huge. More everything, is more better. :V

Malhavoc

Nipple piercings that are pierced through her clothes

Drillkiller


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