SI2: Pleasure Land - p. 27-28 (new one)
Added 2024-12-12 00:16:08 +0000 UTCOk, now we're skipping several pages and see, what happens at the pool. In the previous version Grant was so scared that he went to his room, now I decided to show a bit more.
UPD: I fixed continuity in the panels. Now Betty is everywhere on Gran't left side :)
Comments
Ah! I understand. You do such expressive faces, I was surprised and thought it was a glitch. My personal preference is for the realistic portrayal, rather than abstract, as it stays in line with the realism of the rest of the images.
Alan
2025-01-10 17:14:08 +0000 UTCYeah, it’s a common effect in anime/manga.. just used it for fun
Tarusov
2025-01-10 16:25:13 +0000 UTCGrant's face is smeared on the last panel of the first page. Is that intentional?
Alan
2025-01-10 00:33:09 +0000 UTCThank you! I liked it too!
Tarusov
2024-12-16 11:52:10 +0000 UTCI think it’s great that we‘re revisiting older parts of the story and you’re showing scenes we haven’t seen before also really liked the cave scene
Roman
2024-12-15 21:02:10 +0000 UTCYeah, I promise not to post like that anymore
Tarusov
2024-12-13 18:21:14 +0000 UTCNo worries. As long as you're aware of it. :-)
Jens Bang
2024-12-13 17:44:47 +0000 UTCIt's definitely one of the things you most want to see Betty go through in this experience.
Bruno
2024-12-12 20:28:31 +0000 UTCYeah, sorry. I just posted it as a two page spread intentionally, because I was afraid that people will not see the second page, because the second one wouldn't be shown on email.
Tarusov
2024-12-12 17:30:53 +0000 UTCJust a small thing from my perspective: I read these on a tablet, where a single page fits perfectly in portrait mode. But a double page, like this, means i either have to rotate the tablet for this single page, or zoom in. It's not a big problem, but it did break the reading experience for me.
Jens Bang
2024-12-12 16:47:23 +0000 UTCWhy do you think she would get a BBC on BDSM party? I never said that. She might, but we don't know.
Tarusov
2024-12-12 16:19:29 +0000 UTCIsn't it time to go back to the room where the BDSM was? Everyone was waiting to see Betty get a BBC.
Bruno
2024-12-12 11:00:49 +0000 UTCEnrique should come on Betty more often 😏
blackstone
2024-12-12 10:42:44 +0000 UTCNow that's an altermate trio of characters 🥵
Neb
2024-12-12 08:58:35 +0000 UTCYeah, I should put more of her in the comics!
Tarusov
2024-12-12 00:58:34 +0000 UTCI love that redhead!
Alan
2024-12-12 00:53:58 +0000 UTCI see. It’s just not on her in all but one panel.
Peter Banting
2024-12-12 00:43:26 +0000 UTCit was on the previous page. Enrique came on her accidentally.
Tarusov
2024-12-12 00:41:54 +0000 UTCAlso, there’s some splooge on her chest that came out of knowhere
Peter Banting
2024-12-12 00:37:42 +0000 UTCGod.. I guess so.. I don't have other explanation.. Ok. I'll fix it
Tarusov
2024-12-12 00:25:14 +0000 UTCDid she just teleport from his right side to his left on pg 28?
Peter Banting
2024-12-12 00:23:48 +0000 UTC
