ISEKAI EXORCIST - Chapters 1-5
Added 2023-07-02 10:01:00 +0000 UTCStarting tomorrow, I will begin posting a chapter on ISEKAI EXORCIST Monday and Friday. Next Sunday there will be a new ALL CHAPTERS post exclusively for Ascendants, while Invokers get the 2 chapters per week (might do a double-release day to get to the initial 6-chapters-ahead that I want for Invokers).
The contents in this PDF represents what will be uploaded to RR in the first week of this story (starting around the 17th). Afterwards, I will likewise adopt a 2-chapter-per-week schedule for RR.
I know a lot of people like reading the contents of the chapters in the body of the Patreon posts and I will try and make that work for this series, though expect some external links to pictures, since I can't fit images and such into the body of the text itself.
(There has been made a few changes in the "first 3 chapters" post from the other day and there might be made additional changes before it goes to RR. As always, the ALL CHAPTERS posts will contain the most up-to-date version of the story)
Comments
Thank you, that's great feedback that I'll work on before I make it fully public
Kristoffer Pauly
2023-07-03 08:19:24 +0000 UTCI know it's early I'm just giving my 2 cents so far.
Damian Btooks
2023-07-02 21:58:07 +0000 UTCAfter reading this I feel as though everything kind of happen really quickly and conveniently. And the mc so far has shown no traits that shows he can even live past his first mission with help from his mentor. And also his attitude toward his mentor feel really counterproductive. Anybody who doesn't have PTSD would treat someone who is actively offering to hold their hand in a life or death scenario a bit more reverent regardless of the reason. Remember the mc at this point in time has been told multiple times he his very likely to die on his very first mandatory mission while they provide minimal help to him. Plus the mc seems to be the type of person to depend on other people on every aspect of his life while having a agreeable personality, but it doesn't match the attitude he has toward his mentor.
Damian Btooks
2023-07-02 21:57:25 +0000 UTC
