A New AU MoL Chapter
Added 2022-05-17 14:57:48 +0000 UTCHello dear patrons. No Zenith of Sorcery news, but! I bring you a new Mother of Learning AU chapter. Here are the links:
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/49033/mother-of-learning-the-au-chapters/chapter/908749/predator
https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3360135/3/Mother-of-Learning-The-AU-Chapters
It was very fun to write. Hopefully it's also fun to read. Enjoy.
Comments
I'm going to need an omake chapter where Zorian and his partner are trying to raise their grey hunter shifter children.
Michael T
2022-05-18 22:57:13 +0000 UTCAlso: "He small part of him wondered". Thanks for the chapter - I enjoyed reading it :)
Michael T
2022-05-18 22:50:17 +0000 UTCVery interesting chapter. Showed just how badass Zorian could be as a Grey Hunter shifter, but also the kind of price he'd pay for it. You'd think turning yourself into a terrifying, anti-mage, killing machine would be easy enough, but nooooooooo. There always has to be a catch~ I wish I saw the Kiri's reaction to his final comment, though I agree it ended it on just the right note as is. Too bad.
DiabolicalGenius
2022-05-18 04:35:42 +0000 UTCOk I am not sure I would give him big brother of the year for that bit at the end but overall an interesting what could have been. Though as confident as he seems I am not sure this version could make it out since it took the combined efforts of top mages to get out and I am not sure they could be convinced to work with this version. The fighting ability doesn’t make up for that.
Brian Griffith
2022-05-18 04:28:36 +0000 UTCFun chapter, thanks!
Doodlyboy15
2022-05-18 02:32:58 +0000 UTCThank you typo squad! You sacrifice will not be forgotten! Typos added to the list, to be eventually corrected.
Domagoj Kurmaic
2022-05-17 18:40:34 +0000 UTCAlso, "to go an attack" is probs "and"
Eyke
2022-05-17 18:11:44 +0000 UTCTypo squad at the ready ! "Not that you could turn back the clock and undue the ritual" => "undo" "They were used to fighting off a aranea assassins" => "off aranea" "a dizzying display od acrobatics" => "of"
Adrien Matricon
2022-05-17 18:04:23 +0000 UTCYeah, that's definitely a typo. Added to the list.
Domagoj Kurmaic
2022-05-17 18:02:36 +0000 UTCTypo (maybe?): "fink" is "sink"?
Eyke
2022-05-17 17:52:39 +0000 UTCThis was a really fun read! It's also awesome how much your writing has changed (improved IMHO) since chapter 55 =)
David Zabner
2022-05-17 16:40:44 +0000 UTCThis was disturbingly fun to read. Just how they mesh together and all. I have to wonder if Zorian has retained any of the motherly instincts from the Grey Hunter and is in the process of securing a "nest" to make the next generation of shifted, or at least is planning to once he gets out into the real world. Thank you as always! It's always nice to dive back into this world :D
Prismarinium
2022-05-17 15:49:15 +0000 UTCWith every AU chapter it feels like all you're doing is that the timeline we ended up with was the best possible timeline. Everything else is kind of the worst. Fantastic chapter though! I will never say no to more MoL.
Green0Photon
2022-05-17 15:17:16 +0000 UTC
