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Update until August 6

Check your private messages for updates. Attention new subscribers, I will write to you on August 4-5, you will receive updates according to tier.

Brief description of updates: Anna went to save Bree and Whitney, meeting her sister on the way. Estelle resolved the family conflict and went to work. 

Attention. Story - "Tall models 4" is completed, as many wanted here, not a very good ending and not completed. I haven't decided yet whether I will join that story with the "Boss Lady series", or whether there will be a separate fifth part. In any case, I look forward to feedback and accept suggestions for further development of the plot.

Story - "Police Academy" is delayed for a month, instead of it there will be a short story (150 pages) "Boss lady 3. Gamma Corporation" about which I will write tomorrow.

Enjoy watching. :)


Update until August 6

Comments

I will consider any suggestions. While I think about the plot

Pavel Creator

Is that at least a small suggestion?

Dennis Hallmann

is it possible in a fifth part to let anna, whitney and bree escape from the cage. They work together to overpower Hannah by giving her a double dose of the antidote and taking the waxing formula. But Hannah not only stands by and grabs her sister and Bree, who distract Hannah from the smallest of them, Whitney. They administer the spikes to Hannah and she shrinks to the same size as Anna and Bree. They hold her to immobilize her and meanwhile Whitney finds a lot of the formula and when she sees Anna and Bree having their hands full holding Hannah, Whitney with the formula in her hands thinks she could have the opportunity you drink everything yourself and become the tallest and strongest woman in the world, to whom everyone looks up and admires her beautiful body.

Dennis Hallmann


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