Girls Night pg 27 Sketch
Added 2020-06-23 05:05:04 +0000 UTC
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Hi Robert! If you search 'Chapter 5' you'll get a result for the whole chapter in PDF form :)
WereWorld
2022-07-26 21:15:54 +0000 UTCWhat happened to pg 22,24-26, 28,36,39,40? Missing some story 😕
Robert Yingling
2022-07-26 20:53:37 +0000 UTCNo worries :) Like I said though, you're a bit of a one man army, you could actually sell this stuff. You know how to do horror, like the actual thing that keeps people on edge/guessing. You also probably have a load more stories in your head, so my advice would be start some rough storyboards and use sue as the north star of your portfolio. I don't do fake praise so I don't say it lightly- but this is 'your thing' and it will get you out of the 9 to 5, good luck :)
micheal
2020-07-03 22:56:23 +0000 UTCThank you, thank you Michael! So glad you're invested in this story. Its only going to heat up from here!! 😁
WereWorld
2020-07-02 07:18:53 +0000 UTCYou could make smaller panels that show it flying through the air, like 3 small panels showing it rolling in the air then just a Thud effect subtitle on the last panel with Sue
Alec Whitacre
2020-06-25 10:27:51 +0000 UTCPaws 🥰
Alec Whitacre
2020-06-24 20:27:13 +0000 UTCPart of what's so fantastic about this, apart from the art/story/characters is........I'm pretty crafty, I can predict every twist/see both possibilities/know where its gonna go. But you manage to outsmart me each time Wereworld and I like it :) 'Horror' has bored me for decades, but this is 'horrific', there's actual tension and I wanna know what happens next.
micheal
2020-06-24 03:50:52 +0000 UTCThose years of softball training have come in handy 😉
WereWorld
2020-06-23 18:01:56 +0000 UTCyeah it was meant to be thrown off frame but it is a little hard to translate that. I'll try to clarify it more in the final pass 👍
WereWorld
2020-06-23 18:00:56 +0000 UTCDid that apple fall? I assume it did, but I didn’t see any stress lines to indicate impact.
Brian Thomas
2020-06-23 16:49:18 +0000 UTCGreat work thank you. Nice to see that Sue might be able to eat in the kitchen, but I hope you'll let ashley find something effective in the kitchen to defend against Sue.
Nils
2020-06-23 12:34:38 +0000 UTCPretty good arm for a terrified and concussed young woman.
Spotts1701
2020-06-23 05:34:57 +0000 UTC
