A Girl Named Sue pg14 WIP
Added 2018-11-03 23:20:13 +0000 UTCTFW your shoe size instantly changes...
Comments
oof indeed :P
WereWorld
2018-11-05 16:28:20 +0000 UTCIt is because the process is done slower, but it is better this way, as long as it emphatizes the "body horror" effect and deploys the pain and fear of the TF in a better timing than others before.
Zockereinstein
2018-11-05 15:35:54 +0000 UTCOof <3
Wuschel
2018-11-05 02:33:50 +0000 UTCPrretty cool and great style, although the feet transofrmation looks more like a Wereape than a Werewolf, :) Unless I have no idea of how wolf paws look like in that case, sorry
Nils
2018-11-04 22:11:03 +0000 UTCwow! Thanks so much for the detailed critique! That's EXACTLY what I'm going for with these panels! Glad to see it working :D
WereWorld
2018-11-04 05:24:18 +0000 UTCjust hasn't happened yet ;)
WereWorld
2018-11-04 05:23:41 +0000 UTCI find with the foot here (and the hand earlier) you're taking great care to setup an 'anticipation' panel (panel 2) where we see the normal foot immediately followed by the abrupt breaking of the bones (panel 3) as they reshape themselves into their new form. It really adds a lot of life and kinetic energy to the metamorphosis and I think it's some very successful work. Can't wait to see more! :)
dkurp
2018-11-04 04:28:23 +0000 UTCTfw indeed. I like how some of the reaction dialogue was kept! I noticed the nails are no longer just popping off? Deliberate choice?
ffkid
2018-11-04 01:36:36 +0000 UTC"What is happening?" Three guesses, kid.
Kerlem
2018-11-04 00:13:17 +0000 UTC
