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This is my first time drawing manga. Please tell me if this is strange English.😊 漫画描くのは初めてです。変な英語だったら教えてください😊

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今回は生で食べました😅

Diva

DIVA先生の…エッセイ…!? 個人的にはブロッコリーにはゴマダレかケチャップですね…

thank you!! will will will

Diva

thank you!! Drawing manga is a great way to learn English.😂

Diva

Just a little strange on the "I make it " changing it to" I'll(I will) make it" sounds better

Nephthys

Nice manga! "It's so hard to me" sounds kind of strange, "Looks too hard for me" or "This is too hard for me" would sound better I think. It also makes the joke at the end seem more natural 😊

Marcel


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