Harry's Inferno Chapter 2
Added 2025-08-01 11:55:30 +0000 UTCChapter 2 of Harry's Inferno, in which Harry struggles to come to terms with the reality of his situation, Koriand'r tries to help him as best they can, they manage to stumble upon someone who claims to be able to help them and embark on their new journey together, growing even closer than before.
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I wouldn't normally ask this, but if you notice anything off in this, please let met know. I developed a throat infection at the start of the week and wrote this while quite fevered. I'm feeling better now and I edited it, of course, but still...
Comments
Besides plot necessity, Constantine is the first person Harry's been able to get any information from in years and right now he is desperately in need of any information he can get. Also, while John C is always to be treated with great care, he's not overly prone to selling people out for beer. (Bourbon maybe....)
Brian Jordan
2025-08-20 11:19:39 +0000 UTCSexy and fun, I love their relationship!
Erinnyes
2025-08-19 15:13:38 +0000 UTCWhat about the healing powers that Harry seems to have, maybe help Barbara or her too soon?
yan boul
2025-08-04 08:15:31 +0000 UTCLove this story!! Harry and Starfire are a great couple, love them. Looking forward the next chapter and them meeting Batman. Maybe some shenanigans in Gotham too?
TheWateringWizard
2025-08-04 06:36:21 +0000 UTCLove the chapter and I cannot wait for the next one. Also Harry and Starfire make a cute couple.
Cody
2025-08-02 12:47:07 +0000 UTCDecent chapter, but him being that open with Constantine of all people felt way off. He was always closed off to people and Constantine looks like a cross between a used car salesman, an ambulance chasing attorney and a drug dealer in a back alley. That's the last person on Earth you'd ever confide anything with. He's just far too shady. Not to mention he'd probably try to trick them into selling their souls so he could close a case for booze money.
Kasikan
2025-08-01 23:44:07 +0000 UTCInteresting, I wonder what the pairs reaction will be to a boy scout like superman. Personally I am looking forward to him meeting green lantern
Elias
2025-08-01 15:35:07 +0000 UTCThank you.
Voivode_Writer
2025-08-01 13:42:16 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, as per your request I noticed a couple possible inaccuracies shown below “I studied geometry a little in primary school, though I haven’t in quite a while, but I do vaguely remember that.” Should of been geography instead of geometry I imagine “I love all my money in my other planet,” Harry replied, and he winced. I believe this was supposed be left not love
Grant Blair
2025-08-01 13:37:26 +0000 UTCThank you.
Voivode_Writer
2025-08-01 12:45:25 +0000 UTCThank you.
Voivode_Writer
2025-08-01 12:45:20 +0000 UTCThe only thing I saw was "Ron's pop could fall out of his head", which I think might have been meant to be "Ron's eyes would pop out of his head"? Unless that's a Britishism I'm unfamiliar with
Peter K
2025-08-01 12:42:10 +0000 UTCOne correction, Harry saidnhe studied Geometry, when he should have said Geography.
Durdens Wrath
2025-08-01 12:38:30 +0000 UTC
