A Life Changing Encounter Chapter 3
Added 2025-05-08 11:43:37 +0000 UTCChapter 3 of A Life Changing Encounter, in which Arianne and Rhaenys discuss the recent changes in the latter's life, while Daenerys pulls a muscle cooking, leading Jon to give her a massage with Arianne's most enthusiastic approval.
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Comments
That was brilliant! Daenerys finally fell under their charm, can’t wait for the next chapter ! And I know Rhaenys will totally join them soon too. Of course Rodrick had to jinx himself because they are totally going to find barrels of wildfire down there now.
TheWateringWizard
2025-05-15 09:40:28 +0000 UTCThank you for pointing out the error. I've fixed it.
Voivode_Writer
2025-05-09 11:53:45 +0000 UTCOther than that it was an amazing chapter and I can’t wait to see what comes next
Killian_Jones_Hook
2025-05-09 04:02:59 +0000 UTCHey I don’t normally comment on any kind of spelling or grammar issues but there is one spot at the beginning of the massage sequence where I think you forgot to edit. “Yes,” Daenerys replied. “That just felt really good. It hurts a little on the BLANK side, but it’s good.”
Killian_Jones_Hook
2025-05-09 04:02:26 +0000 UTC
