Witchcraft and Devilry Chapter 20
Added 2024-12-24 12:32:13 +0000 UTCChapter 20 of Witchcraft and Devilry in which Harry, Hermione, and Luna all deal with the horrific aftermath of Voldemort's first move, Malfoy makes a big mistake, and Harry learns the truth about the night his parents died.
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ππΎππΎππΎππΎ this was the full range of emotions in this chapter! Great chapter looking forward to the next update!
J T
2024-12-26 19:41:19 +0000 UTCWhat a fantastic chapter! The way Harry dealt with Malfoy was great and how you handled and dealt with Luna and Hermioneβs grief was brilliant. Some great writing. Loved how brutal Harry was at the end with Malfoy. Canβt wait for more
TheWateringWizard
2024-12-26 17:39:52 +0000 UTCNow we need Harry to mock Draco in the great hall π
Tony
2024-12-24 17:49:38 +0000 UTCHonestly, with no with thier parents dead, I was fully expecting Hermione or Luna to ask Rias to make them devils so that they were powerful enough to avenge thier parents. Whether Rias agreed or not didn't really matter. Still, great chapter and I can't wait for the next one.
redhawktiger
2024-12-24 16:17:30 +0000 UTCThis was really a great ending to the chapter, the dealing with Lucius was truly perfect misinformation.
Talsen
2024-12-24 15:33:21 +0000 UTCSuch an excellent story canβt wait to see what happens next
SiriusSmut55
2024-12-24 14:13:55 +0000 UTCThis story continues to be excellent! That moment when Harry used Wandless Magic to absolutely destroy Malfoy was excellent and of course Harry finding out that it was Snape who told Voldemort about the prophecy was another great moment. Rias, Akeno, and Fleur having a conversation together and them stating that if Fleur wants to be involved with Harry that she has to get used to her and Akeno was touching and it shows just how much they care and love for Harry even now. That ending though with Harry torturing Lucius and beheading him was just perfect and even him casting the Dark Mark to frame Voldemort for the crime. Words cannot describe how many I enjoy reading this and as always I shall be looking forward to the next update.
Cody
2024-12-24 13:45:03 +0000 UTC
