A Helpful Hire
Added 2024-10-11 11:29:01 +0000 UTCA oneshot about Harry and Ginny hiring Gabrielle as a nanny and the shenanigans that follow.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pAm6fUl1Rqk67SABtVrFQPncemrpcYN2FY5DkfAyqag/edit?tab=t.0
Comments
I like the general idea, but the story spent waaaaay too much time on Ginnys angst for a one shot, and almost all of it felt like a weird prelude to a cheating breakup. Following that up with them all being drunk when they actually did the thing and I'm putting time until divorce at 9 months or less and I just couldn't get into the smut at all. Again, the general idea is sound and the general prose quality is excellent as always. The tone and actual characters on this one just aren't there.
Erinnyes
2024-10-25 14:04:37 +0000 UTCLoved it
TheWateringWizard
2024-10-25 12:05:30 +0000 UTCThis feels like Ginny trying to justify cheating on Harry and him being ok with it because the plot demands it. Your stories are pretty much all like this.
Hakai
2024-10-12 15:08:25 +0000 UTCI really like this pairing of Ginny/Harry/Gabby. Both these stories are great and I’m always looking for more.
Aron Mac
2024-10-11 22:10:14 +0000 UTCGreat job! I liked that Ginny and Gabby were the ones that drove the plot forward and made the threesome happen. I really like this setting, so if any of you feel a hunger for more there's a good one named Marital Bliss by WD_Oneill.
Handyandy
2024-10-11 14:09:36 +0000 UTC
