The Heat of Dorne Chapter 18
Added 2024-09-10 11:55:48 +0000 UTCHello all.
I was advised to include a blurb before the link in these posts and will be doing so going forward. This is probably the penultimate chapter of the King's Landing arc, featuring the big fight that Chapter 17 teased.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1txPFu-ZxCgrhR9pKcApwi4QCXu3EDL721vl9ODNki_E/edit
Comments
An absolutely incredible plan by Daemon and his lovers, so happy they got rid of the Mountain while also getting the High Septon killed. I hope Varys doesn’t have any kamikaze move ready, what with the Wildfire beneath the city. If not, his execution will be most pleasant. Happy for Arianne that after so long she was able to get her Daemon back. Love the story
TheWateringWizard
2024-09-17 17:27:19 +0000 UTCDamn tease we need Jon with more Targaryen women
Daeron Targaryen
2024-09-11 14:28:05 +0000 UTCThank you. I fixed the errors.
Voivode_Writer
2024-09-10 18:23:33 +0000 UTCGreat chapter. Loved the heist movie style flashbacks that explained the plan back multiple chapters. I found some small things you might want to take a look at. Feel free to ignore or delete this comment. "Race remained clear in his violet eyes as he said, “Daemon is correct.”" Rage maybe? "“Fuck,” Gregor thought to himself as he stared down at the annoying little man before." Before him "“Time to go then,” Daemon muttered, grabbing his helmet." and "His squire had already helped him into his armor earlier, but when Arianne and the others came to speak, he’d sent him off with his helmet to wait for him." Contradiction here "His heavy platemail, dull gray and scared from battle," Scarred "As Glegane feinted towards his head" Clegane
Handyandy
2024-09-10 18:11:05 +0000 UTCAnother great chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
Acbrother247
2024-09-10 13:53:49 +0000 UTC
