Witchcraft and Devilry Chapter 10
Added 2024-08-06 11:49:02 +0000 UTCChapter 10 of Witchcraft and Devilry.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XM50ymDp-MtjL6BGYfuenoEGNaP6b12A_e0hjNUEcqQ/edit
Comments
Epic chapter. Really solid plot development and character work capped off by an insanely hot first time with Luna. Great work.
Erinnyes
2024-08-20 13:28:14 +0000 UTCYay! Harry and Luna finally had sex ! You described perfectly what I love about how you write Luna. The way she seemingly innocently says the most depraved things is hilarious. Love her Damn… Voldy is back…
TheWateringWizard
2024-08-08 09:29:51 +0000 UTCYou know, while I enjoy your other fics, I genuinely think this is your best story, plot and pace-wise. It has good lewd scenes but is also interesting as its own story. Speaking of lewd scenes, I’m writing The Inheritance and DxD Ranch on Ao3. Give them a look and if you like my style, I’d be honoured to write some lewd scenes for you, either as extra content or as a fanfic of your fanfic ;)
Christian E. Y.
2024-08-06 23:42:12 +0000 UTCThank you to everyone who pointed out the Jon error. It's been fixed.
Voivode_Writer
2024-08-06 16:26:43 +0000 UTCYou put Jon's name instead of Harry in the sex scene with Luna.
Alex Omega
2024-08-06 16:09:38 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, though you called Harry Jon when he was taking Luna's virginity at one point. As for a piece for Luna, I honestly think a pawn would be best. Luna doesn't really have any traits, for the knight or rook. And while she is a magic user, she's more of an unpredictable/unorthodox spell caster than a powerhouse. I honestly feel that way of unique thought she has is better suited to a pawn, and thier ability to temporarily use the attributes of other pieces then the power she'd gain magically from a bishop. Just my thoughts. Great job on the story though, this is one of my favorites of yours
redhawktiger
2024-08-06 13:44:15 +0000 UTCJust a small mistake here
David Clyne
2024-08-06 12:54:31 +0000 UTC“Just let me know if you want me to slow down,” Jon said, continuing to fuck her with short little thrusts to let her get used to him as he gradually moved deeper.
David Clyne
2024-08-06 12:54:15 +0000 UTC“Oh, you’re so big,” Luna sighed dreamily. “Just let me know if you want me to slow down,” Jon said, Whoops, there's a Jon here. Thanks for the chapter, Luna is always one of my favorites.
Handyandy
2024-08-06 12:41:06 +0000 UTCVery nice chapter and hopefully Harry won’t be stuck as a human for too long
Luna Wolf
2024-08-06 12:13:54 +0000 UTC
