Screenplay: Introducing Eden (The Turning Point) V1.23

Want to finish writing the important parts of the game? The intro is followed by Dr. Eden; she wears a witch uniform and is a geneticist. She gives Nina the means to grow in the game and her introduction creates ramifications to the whole story We introduce in this screenplay the intrusive thoughts a Disco Elysium mechanic copied into the game all the while Intrusive thoughts aren't optional; they do give the player insight, as 99.999% of the game is Nina standing in spots. This does not include body thoughts; those are for your route in particular.

The game is a comedy; I need to add that I do want the game to do well as a game as well as an expansion game, so I put a lot of work into the writing as well. I will never apologize for doing a good job.

DRAFT 1 OF EDEN This draft may change; please enjoy.

INT. DRUG STORE 2087, DAY 2

The setting is stark and clinical. NINA enters, visibly nervous. She meets DR. EDEN for the first time, a woman with I-cup breasts and 5'11" in height, yet her demeanor speaks of a relentless ambition to alter her body even further.

DR. EDEN (Professional, introducing herself) "Hello, Nina. I'm Eden. I've reviewed your genetic analysis."

NINA (Anxiously) "How does it look, Doctor?"

DR. EDEN (scuffs) "Not a doctor."

NINA (Anxiously) "Oh yeah, this is similar to a pharmacist, right?"

DR. EDEN (smiling) "Correct."

Dr. Eden gives a clinical smile, then, without a word, turns off the security cameras, casting a more ominous atmosphere. Nina darts around, looking confused, as the lights fade down.

DR. EDEN (Now with a sinister edge.) "Your results, Nina... are uniquely disappointing. You have no genetic pliability, no potential. You can't even gain weight effectively. By all accounts, there is nothing for you. You are not compatible with anything."

Nina's face falls—a mix of confusion and growing fear.

DR. EDEN (Leaning in, voice dropping) "This is so grand; no muscle growth. You're done growing, done with gaining hips, and everything you have to you is an average life span with death at 76. You are the most average petite woman there ever was."

Nina looks down at rock bottom.

DR. EDEN (Leaning in, voice dropping) "I was once like you—pathetic, frail, a loser, slim beyond belief, tiny. But look at me now; I'm the definition of a winner."

She gestures to her excessively curvy body. Nina's deadpan face absorbs the second-hand insults with weariness..

NINA (almost in tears) "If nothing works for me, then why are you saying all this? It hurts."

DR. EDEN (Aspirational, yet twisted) "I'm not done yet. I aim for 8 feet, and Q-cups. And you, Nina, you share so much of my genetic makeup; you're perfect for my experiments. We're like how the young say... Sisters from another mother. genetical twins, where it counts."

NINA (Defensive, grasping at straws) "But can't I just take those muscle- or butt-enhancing pills?"

DR. EDEN (Laughing coldly) "They'd do nothing. Its sad to say, but not everyone can have their genes modified after adulthood. Its the nature of the profession."

SFX: DRAWER OPENS. Eden pulls something from the drawer.

DR. EDEN (angrily) "The same they told me a long time ago, but I—changed that. Yet I can't grow anymore. I'm at my physical limit again."

Dr. Eden produces a tiny ampoule.

DR. EDEN (Seriously) "This isn't just another supplement. It's a leap into the unknown. Its the second version, of my personal potential overrider. TITANIA DOS"

NINA (quizzical and worried) "What is it?"

DR. EDEN "Something I made for me, it will overwrite the very nature of what God said you could do to YOUR body."

Eden loads the vial into the small machine.

NINA (Shaken) "But... the risks?"

DR. EDEN (Bluntly nonchalant) "Cancer, deformity, perhaps even death. But imagine the possibilities. Growth beyond natural limits, Nina; your body redefined, Nina. No longer small, Nina; that small you goes away with a pinch."

NINA (Struggling with the decision) "This... This isn't really legal; I know that much. There are a lot of laws on genetic modification."

DR. EDEN (With a menacing grin) "That's right, this is highly illegal, but we're "move fast, break things" kind of people. How big do you want to get Nina?"

NINA (mumbling) "I want to be the biggest one."

DR. EDEN "That's the spirit! Now let's shake hands with a pen and paper."

The atmosphere is thick with tension as Dr. Eden presents a contract.

DR. EDEN (Eagerly) "Sign here. This makes you an official co-creator of the formula. And as responsible if anything leaks."

The contract has all fields correctly written, from Nina's ID to her address. Nina hesitates, but signs anyway. Eden rips the contract from Nina's hands. Nina's hands are still thrembling.

DR. EDEN (Triumphant) "Remember, Nina; speak of this, and we both face a lifetime in women's prison."

She then retrieves a pistol-like syringe from the vial.

DR. EDEN (Serious) "There's no turning back now."

Nina nods, and Dr. Eden administers the injection to her neck. The effects start on the spot. She clutches her head in pain.

NINA (Agonized) "My head... it feels like it's going to explode!"

DR. EDEN (excitedly) "It's working? What an excellent sign! try to calm down"

NINA (Disoriented) "But I look the same..."

DR. EDEN (Patiently) "Migraines are the first sign; it means its working. Now, let me show you something."

Dr. Eden pulls up an app, displaying Nina's genetic potential.

DR. EDEN (Pointing at the screen) "See, your potential was in the red, non-existent. Now, it's turning green. This means any genetic modification product will work 100 times faster on you."

Nina's eyes widen in a mix of fear and fascination.

DR. EDEN (Explaining further) "But you need to fuel these changes. Eat lots of adipose tissue; focus on a carb- and fat-rich diet. Your hunger will match your potential."

She points to her own towering height.

DR. EDEN (Smiling) "The more you grow in any way you choose, the taller you'll become, like me. But beware, Nina, there might be... unexpected side effects."

NINA (Anxiously) "Like what?"

DR. EDEN (Half-jokingly) "Buying clothes is harder for taller women."

Nina smiles.

DR. EDEN (Half-jokingly) "If you grow tentacles or something strange, come running. I have to take measures."

Nina's face goes blank. They exchange contacts. Dr. Eden then hugs Nina, a strange mix of envy and nostalgia in her eyes.

DR. EDEN (Sentimentally) "I sometimes miss being small like you."

[Genetic app status GOT!]

Nina, now feeling an intense, gnawing hunger, looks bewildered and slightly panicked. Something else is brewing deep inside her head; something came with the insatiable hunger.

A voice from the recesses of your head, "it," manifests. GOURMANDISE GLOUTONNE the embodiment of hunger.

GOURMANDISE GLOUTONNE (alarmed. V.O.) "This is no ordinary hunger; it's like a black hole that was birthed in your belly.  You can clearly feel your stomach eating your other organs—the thought of turning to the person in front into a feast feels almost inevitable."

Nina is bewildered while holding her tummy.

NINA (Struggling) "W-What? W-Who was that? I just had dinner, and I'm usually not this hungry. What's happening to me? I've never been this hungry in my fucking life! DOCTOR!"

DR. EDEN (Calmly) "Not a doctor. That's perfectly normal. Your body is adapting, demanding more resources for the upcoming changes."

NINA (in pain) "No, that was; this is something else. AAAHHHHHGGG"

Nina coughs; her hunger is too overwhelming. Dr. Eden, almost nonchalantly, hands her a sandwich.

DR. EDEN (sighing) "Here."

Nina absorbs the sandwich in one bite. She is chewing it whole.

Dr. Eden then guides Nina through the range of genetic modification products available, each with its own detailed description and targeted genes.

DR. EDEN (Explaining) "These are our premium genetic enhancement products. The Breast Enhancement Cocktail and Cream, and the Butt Enhancement Cream. Each is designed to target specific genes for maximum growth and efficiency."

Nina listens intently, her eyes widening at the scientific jargon and the promise of transformation.

DR. EDEN (Pointing out the prices) "With the 50% discount, the creams are now $150 for 30 applications, and the bottles are $200 for 20 applications. We have products for the bust, buttocks, and muscles."

Nina's mind reels. Another voice appears: GUIDE CONFIDANT, your mind's eye.

GUIDE CONFIDANT (V.O.) "Jesus! Only the ultra-rich can afford any of this. Is she lying? Did she mark up the pricing?

GOURMANDISE GLOUTONNE (V.O.) "You could no longer eat food if you bought these every month."

GUIDE CONFIDANT (V.O.) "Buy with hesitation; consider alternatives; we need to pay rent and possibly a gym membership if what we want is muscle focus on protein and creatine instead of costly supplements."

NINA (Shocked) "This is still so expensive... Are you sure this is half-off? It feels like only rich people can afford this."

DR. EDEN (Nodding) "Unfortunately, yes. But remember, with your enhanced potential, these will work far better on you than on anyone else."

Another voice calls to you. Ambition, the voice for more: AMBITION DÉVORANTE.

AMBITION DÉVORANTE (V.O.) "WE HAVE THE UPPER HAND! CRUSH THEM, MAKE THEM SQUEAL. You need to make the best of it. If you increase fast enough, your tips should match what you want. The problem is... with your savings."

GUIDE CONFIDANT (disappointed) (V.O.) "you can only pick one for now."

As Nina reluctantly agrees to purchase the breast growth products, Dr. Eden delves into the history of genetic modification.

DR. EDEN (Reflectively) "Genetic modification is heavily regulated now, unlike the free-for-all of the 60s. There were disasters with super soldiers, modded babies... etc. It's why we see those with extreme proportions. They're remnants of an unregulated era."

GUIDE CONFIDANT (V.O.) "2060 to 2070: the genetic revolution, an absolute wild west. Similar to the AI revolution of the 2020s, it displaced so many jobs. A catastrophe for the economy."

ESPIRIT STRATÉGIQUE (V.O.) "Oh, those girls at the bar, they are the same age as you; their richer, less morally inclined parents did this to them, and the fatishists came raining in."

AMBITION DÉVORANTE (V.O.) "Yet we will use the weapons of war against them; bring the artillery."

NINA (V.O.): "They will not know what hit them."

NINA (thinking-out-loud) "No wonder I can't compete for tips at the bar..."

DR. EDEN (With a sly grin) "Well, Nina, let's see how they compete with you once your transformation begins."

NINA (Asking) "One last thing, Doc-"

DR. EDEN (interrupting) "I'm not a doctor. But I do have a PhD in progress."

NINA (holding her head in existential dread) "What happens if it scrambles my head? Like if I start hearing voices telling me what to do. I feel like my sanity is failing me. Like something is deeply wrong."

DR. EDEN (mockingly calm) "HAHAHA, Oh, it's just the headache; ignore it."

GUIDE CONFIDANT (calming) (V.O.) "You are perfectly fine! Perfect as it can be; its just a headache."

NINA (Muttering) "I'm perfectly fine. Got it."

Nina, holding her purchases, steps out of the store with a mixture of excitement and apprehension about her future.

FADE OUT.

INT. NINA'S APARTMENT - DAY 2 (EVENING)

Nina is at home when her phone rings. It's her boss from the gastro-bar.

BOSS (Concerned) "Hey Nina, I heard there was an issue at work with the tips. Molly, Jill, and Ashleigh made around 300 Reales, and you made only 12 in tips. Are you okay?"

AMBITION DÉVORANTE (fuming) (V.O.) "Pity act! She's subtly mocking you for being flat, small, and unempowered."

NINA (Trying to sound upbeat) "Oh, it's nothing; I just need to improve my service, that's all."

BOSS (Hesitant) "Well, I was thinking about pooling the tips to share them equally, but if you're okay with the current system..."

AMBITION DÉVORANTE (fiercely) (V.O.) "Share tips? Absurd! You're destined for more. You'll soon overshadow them all."

NINA (V.O.) "But isn't the whole point to earn more tips?"

From within, a different perspective emerges: ÉTHIQUE ÉLASTIQUE.

ÉTHIQUE ÉLASTIQUE (thoughtfully) (V.O.) "Pooling might be fair, a gesture of good faith. It's not a bad idea if you're aiming for rapid growth and immediate gains."

Now, your logical and cautious side, ESPIRIT STRATÉGIQUE, steps in.

ESPIRIT STRATÉGIQUE (reasonably) (V.O.) "Consider this: what if your growth isn't as rapid as you hope? Or worse, what if it's all a facade? Caution is prudent in uncharted waters."

GUIDE CONFIDANT (speculatively) (V.O.) "Dr. Eden did make a convincing case. Could she have misled you? No, it all seemed too intricate for a mere deception."

BOSS (Concerned) "Are you still there?"

After a moment of internal debate, Nina snaps.

[GAMEPLAY: YOU'D MAKE A DECISIVE ACTION HERE; CHOOSE WHISELY]

NINA (Firmly) "No, I mean, yes, I'm still here; you shouldn't have to do that. The customer's preference reigns supreme."

After ending the call, Nina heads to the bathroom. A virtual tutorial appears, guiding her through her new regimen.

GUIDE CONFIDANT (encouragingly) (V.O.) "Let's embark on this transformative journey. Apply the creams daily, and don't forget the pills. Remember, protein is key for muscle growth. With Eden's formula, the potential for growth is limitless."

NINA (V.O.) "Got it."

Nina attentively follows the instructions, applying the creams with a mix of hope and trepidation.

GUIDE CONFIDANT (V.O.) (Prompting) "Pills increase your capacity for breast, butt, and muscle growth. Level up these body parts by consuming more, but be careful. Overeating beyond your capacity can lead to excessive fat gain."

Nina pauses, pondering this new reality.

NINA (To herself) "Some people do like bigger figures... Maybe only gaining weight wouldn't be so bad."

The tutorial chimes in, confirming her thoughts.

GUIDE CONFIDANT (V.O.) (Affirmatively) "Absolutely. You can grow in all directions, and that will also increase your height. So, keep up with the pills and creams, and make sure to eat a lot."

Nina nods with a determined look on her face. She's ready to embark on this transformative journey, uncertain yet hopeful about the future.