Pokemon comic: Double The Giants Page 8 (WIP)
Added 2024-04-10 17:20:25 +0000 UTCGabriel is finally let out for some air, though he is covered in two types of giantess spit.
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For sure
Svenyatta
2024-04-10 21:04:11 +0000 UTCHomie's gotta go back for his hat? 😏
TheFink72
2024-04-10 21:03:27 +0000 UTCYeah, fair enough. I figured since it was a good page it could carry the concept, it had many panels, and I didn't want to just repeat myself. Plus I did also like the idea of Juliette spitting him out so I was compelled to do that too. Thinking about it more, there is more I could've done while still having variety. That sort of comes with the territory when doing weekly uploads and writing the story as you go, you miss some things that are obvious in hindsight. Also worry not, there will be plenty more mouthplay sections as the comic goes on.
Svenyatta
2024-04-10 21:00:13 +0000 UTCI was kinda hoping it would last longer 🙁
TheFink72
2024-04-10 20:54:05 +0000 UTCYeah, that was the thing that I was excited to get to once the tongue scene was done lmao.
Svenyatta
2024-04-10 17:27:22 +0000 UTCgotta love the ‘plehhhh’
Ethan!
2024-04-10 17:25:17 +0000 UTC
