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"I'm okay!" (DD4, Chapter Two, pages 15-18)

This week, Alexandra and her father address some sticky topics. 


NAMES!

Last week, a reader (hi, Emmanuelle) pointed out that Alexandra's dad was previously referred-to as "Andrew," but that Alexandra's uncle was also named "Andrew."

Here's Nikos calling dad "Andrew:"

Now, I knew there was something fishy going on with the names. Something about calling dad "Andrew" wasn't sitting right with me. While writing these pages, I swear—I swear!—I specifically remember opening up an early DD doc to find a little text file where I kept all the names, and that text file told me that DD's dad was named "Andrew."  I remember this because my laptop is old and slow, and that's where I would have looked for the name, and I would have wanted to avoid the trouble because my laptop is so old and slow.

But then, Emmanuelle is perfectly right, as well. Here's a page from DD2 where we learn that DD's uncle is named "Andrew:"

Here's the fun part: I wouldn't put it past myself to have two "names" documents, each containing conflicting information. So I went digging again, through the work files for DD2, DD3, and a few others. I would go back into the previous pages of DD4 to change dad's name, but I wanted to know what had happened. Meanwhile, I picked a new name off the top of my head for DD's dad. I swear this part is true too: I figured I'd call him "Edward."

Among my files, this was the only result I could find for name references (screenshotted from my Scrivener work file for DD2):

I could not find whatever mystery document I could swear I had consulted earlier for DD4, the one that told me dad's name was "Andrew." This exact same "DELILAH'S FAMILY" file appears in my Scrivener files for both DD2 and DD3.

Anyway, I've gone through and (I believe) changed all instances of "Andrew" to "Edward." I've also corrected some later text in Chapter Two. The updated page from Chapter One is below, but I have not yet corrected the files in any of the webcomic-places (and many of them will probably go un-corrected; instead, let's all chalk the name-flub up to too much wine on Nikos' part).

I don't know what the moral of this story is except maybe that the human mind is a gooey thing. Gooey and full of holes, like melted Swiss cheese. Or at least mine is.

And thank you, Emmanuelle, for pointing this out to me.


ITEMS OF INTEREST

I encountered an unusually high number of interesting little things on the internet this week, and they might similarly be of interest to you, for reasons that may or may not be obvious.

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My partner's schedule is weird this week and our toddler is being (I have been informed) Very Toddler-y, so I'm sneaking colouring time in where I can. Fortunately, some of it is the upcoming stargazing sequence which is both relaxing to work on and shouldn't be too difficult! I look forward to sharing it.

Don't do anything too dangerous,

TC

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Comments

Sneaky time is still time. And this book continues to look incredible and read wonderfully.

Ben Hatke


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