Update 21 is now out for Grunt tier Patrons and above! : )
Added 2025-08-04 09:36:01 +0000 UTCHere it is folks: https://www.patreon.com/posts/hc3-peacekeepers-135306335
Enjoy, and thank you for your support ; )
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Hello, and thank you for the feedback! : ) 1. Yeah, I’m actually quite happy that, with all the text I wrote in those scenes, it’s the only thing that stood out to you as cringe^^ I guess it’s more of quick and easy pron trope that, even if it’s not rooted in reality, does a good job highlighting the girl’s corruption by showing she’s been “through a lot”, yet still retains some of her early innocence/purity and is still useful to the Duke. I’ll try to be more careful from now on, but I can’t promise anything because I’m pretty sure you aren’t the first one to tell me that, but I go through so much pron text all year long I tend to forget sometimes. 2. Rose as a maid is less about foreshadowing than about putting her in a new situation and spicing up her relation with the Duke during certain scenes. She’s still a princess, and she will remain one, but she’s now more open to cast her pride aside to serve the Duke. Sometimes, I like to introduce new dynamics so things are less linear, although I can understand it won’t always work for everyone.
N_taii
2025-08-07 19:13:35 +0000 UTCSo, just a little bit of personal feedback. It gets old to say how much I love everything about this, so I'll be a bit nitpicky and talk about the things that I felt were off: 1. "I can't believe you are still this tight after fucking 1 bazillion of times." I hate that trope with a passion. It's obviously biologically wrong and it has that juvenile vibe of someone that doesn't know a whole lot about vaginas. I know it is used a lot, but I really hate it whenever I see it. The Duke should really know. 2. Not sure I like the Princess to Maid thing. At least not if it is a foreshadowing of things to come. It feels out of character. Just like the Priestess to Slave development felt a little forced. They are both a bit jarring. But that's all I have to say. Still love it anyways!
Dominique
2025-08-05 07:37:49 +0000 UTCLet's Go!
Mister Frost
2025-08-04 09:39:17 +0000 UTC
