Proof of Life #151: Progressing the Main Quest, adding additional content.

Thanks, that's what I was wondering. It's really hard for me to figure out what works and what doesn't during such scenes, so if I hear people like it, I'll try to add it more into the game.

N_taii

The narration during the scene with Brutus and Alys was great when it was describing Brutus and the animalistic mating, imho it's a great addition.

Kudo

Awesome, never having the full picture of what’s really happening is a great way to build tension and anticipation!

Well, most NTR-based games tend to be quite predictable when it comes to corruption, honestly, and I'm not trying to reinvent the wheel either. But I'll try my best to make it interesting : )

N_taii

Thank you! : )

N_taii

Yes, I thought that too. Narration can add more flavor to the scene, and descriptions can be quite hot in NTR (or in every H game for that matter).

N_taii

Yup, around the 15th of November for Update 1 : )

N_taii

Thanks for the feedback. With the Partial PoV and the mystery aspect of it being an inherent part of HC3, I'm not about to forget it, don't worry^^

N_taii

Yup. By the time I hit enter I realized how stupid my question was hahahahahaha Deep down I already knew but I dont now why but I grasped to that last hope of it being 3 scenes for each character, even if it was unreasonable 😁

chocalho123

I really like your new way of writing. I think it helps add to the immersion of the story. Though I was fan of the writing in both HC1 and HC2 as well. I can tell you're improving a lot each game though. I can't wait to see where the story goes from here. Keep up the good work.

Weekendwarrior95

Last thing he said was mid November if I remember correctly

Snowman9712

The corruption of the princess is predictable, after all, most of us are from the Henteria Chronicles1 and 2, I am more looking forward to Haylen and the two childhood sweethearts plot~~~~~

lehann

For the scene, I prefer your current way of writing, the dialogue is the main body, but it is more exciting to add a narrative description to assist. I like sentences that describe the corruption of the heroines, for example, "Those who know them can't imagine that the priestess​/ice queen/princess actually..."

Medamayaki

I came across this game by chance but it excites me.I will look forward to next updating and will continue to support you.If possible, I would like to know when the next version will come.thank to create the wonderful game.

"I've talked about this before, but some of you may have noticed I added a lot more narrative descriptions of the scenes as well as their participants' thoughts. I thought this might add an extra flavor to the scenes themselves, rather than all dialogues. For those who have noticed, what did you think of it? Was it better in HC2 where there was barely any narration, or is it better now?" For this part, I personally liked it. As you know that this is mostly a text based game so the narrations do make the scenes more fluid(additionally to your brilliant pixel animations ofc). Another personal opinion: I really enjoy the mystery aspect, and the obliviousness of the MC when it comes to the build up of the sex scenes. You do an excellent job of that and I just wanted to make sure that you do keep this part in mind when you work on the project. ^^

allahim

I don't really want to make it a certain length, I just want to make a satisfying story that feels complete, whatever time it may take. Still, if HC3 is anything like HC2, I suppose it will be at least 15, possibly 20 hours long.

N_taii

How long will this game be? Do you know how long you want to make it or have an estimation?

YungZeus

In total^^ 3 for each character would be... really hard to achieve with the time that I have.

N_taii

Thanks for the hard work. When you say 3 scenes for the update you mean for each character or 3 scenes in total?

chocalho123

Thanks for the feedback! There were already quite a few of the heroines' thoughts incorporated into HC2, but this time I'm going for that AND narrative description of the scenes. This should bring more diversity to the writing : )

N_taii

yes, please add thoughts in h scenes. esp with the main girls. will make it even hotter than they already are my man.

Marciano Tresca