Janurary Commission: The Birth
Added 2016-01-24 05:03:38 +0000 UTC She had never experienced pain so sharp before as the contractions came rapidly and the child she carried for months began to fight for life. Encouraging words from the voice on the other side of the wall would be drowned out by the sounds of her own screams and moaning. She was as a mix of desperation and panic she pushed with all she had. Where were the ones that kept her in this cell? Surely they heard her?
She was getting weaker. She had never wanted something to end sooner more in her life, but finally, finally, the first sign that the ordeal and her soon to be son was ready to make his introduction to the world.
Comments
Well there IS Dr. Van Born as well as Noah..but yes I picked up along time ago on "Cyborg/Android..still even Lor did not feel the need to make suffer just to suffer..Still your meaning is understood
Lordgriffin
2016-01-26 18:42:47 +0000 UTCWell, at that point in the story anyway.
Ebonyleopard
2016-01-26 02:59:45 +0000 UTCI'm just saying, have you actually seen any humans at all so far?
Ebonyleopard
2016-01-26 02:59:29 +0000 UTCwell now Wait a moment here, I see most animals as "less-than'human" but I can still GIVE a shit... I get it these are all mengele types....I am just saying not EVERYONE woudl be....
Lordgriffin
2016-01-25 18:44:32 +0000 UTCThink back to what you know about the first story. Where there actually any humans in it?
Ebonyleopard
2016-01-25 05:48:05 +0000 UTCGiven the entire point of the story thus far seems angled at the humans (at least those we've seen thus far) seeing the humanimals as less-than-human, not even really sapient beings, in a very dramatic way, I really think it wouldn't make much sense for them to be acting like they give a shit. The humans we've seen thus far all seem to be scientists without ethical or moral constraints of most kinds. I'm put in mind of Mengele, had he been a supervillain of some sort.
UltraFennec
2016-01-25 01:58:27 +0000 UTCHey Mr. El...let me start by saying NOT being able to hit a "return" to drop the cursor down a line is REALLY getting on my last nerve..... That said, I wanted to comment on your art. You must REALLY really hate humans.... I know your making an antagonist...but even labs have veterinarians...and if they are trying to successfully breed a super Hybrid, one woudl think SOME human would be there..and are we saying NO maker will ever actually be NICE or kind to a humanimal? As a medic, i can also tell you that unless it is a complication of pregnancy...the women tell me yes child birth is painful but not OMG painful (but I am a guy and may have NO idea what I am talkng about)
Lordgriffin
2016-01-24 21:11:34 +0000 UTChey Mr EL:
Lordgriffin
2016-01-24 21:08:14 +0000 UTChey Mr EL:
Lordgriffin
2016-01-24 21:08:14 +0000 UTCO_o
UltraFennec
2016-01-24 16:37:47 +0000 UTCPUUUUSSSSSHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
RicanWolf
2016-01-24 06:28:31 +0000 UTCWoah. Ouch...
firandor
2016-01-24 05:11:32 +0000 UTC
