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Added 2021-03-31 10:53:41 +0000 UTCSuddenly Tuija slashed her whip and hit it to Raisa’s back and side. The tip of the whip turned until her belly, and sudden pain made her scream. She was expecting Tuija to thread her first or even hit with her fists. People were laughing, shouting, and encouraging Tuija to hit harder. Someone wished Minna to show her skills with the whip. Whip mark was burning Raisa’s skin, and the wound was bloody.
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I think we need a nice front view where we can see the anguish on her face. Maybe the next one wraps around her rib cage and slashes into her nipple. I hear that is surprisingly painful and more so when it's unexpected! Just saying!!
Velcro
2021-03-31 22:58:14 +0000 UTCAh, but don't scar her *too* badly.
Fritz Sands
2021-03-31 19:33:18 +0000 UTCEntertainment for the entire family.
Henry Locker
2021-03-31 11:08:35 +0000 UTC
