Map of the World of Enteria (Draft - In Progress)
Added 2024-07-21 18:51:17 +0000 UTCHi all! When I started this story, I sketched out a map of where things were so I could keep track of it all. As Mirian starts to expand her journey to other lands, I figured you all might want to see that map so it's easier to keep track of where things are. However, instead of making people trying to decipher my chickenscratch as they squint at a blurry photo of a piece of stained printer paper, I worked to make a map on the Inkarnate website, which is extremely cool.
This map is a draft! Baracuel is mostly complete. Most of the important parts of Persama and Akana Praediar are present. Tlaxhuaco and Zhighua are not even closed to finished. It's also not necessarily to scale, though I've tried to make distances and scale relatively consistent. It's also possible some things on the map need to change to better fit the story.
As I fill out the map more, I'll post updated versions.
Also, story patch notes:
- I ended up making some changes to the end of Chapter 81 after the fight to give Mirian a bit more of an emotional victory so that book 1 concludes better.
- I made a very small change to one section of Chapter 83 to clarify Mirian's emotional state (annoyed, angry)
Nothing has fundamentally changed about the outcome of those chapters, but hopefully they feel a bit better. Thanks again for the feedback.
- As always, I continue to work though all the grammar/conventions edits people suggest and update the chapters here with any corrections. That's not a new thing, but these patch notes seem really short so I'm padding them out a bit by mentioning it.
Enjoy the map, and thanks again for your wonderful support! It's really cool having such a great audience along with me as I write this story.
Comments
so far we have a parallel to North America, being Akana, a parallel to South America, being Tlaxhuaco, a parallel to Europe, being Baracuel, a parallel to Asia, being Zhigua, and a parallel to the Middle East, being Persama. I wonder if we’ll ever get parallels to Australia and Africa.
Leaf
2025-06-16 13:43:43 +0000 UTCSo from the scale of the maps and context from the text, I'm guessing each continent is roughly the size of the US? Maybe a bit larger, but not as large as all of North America. That means there's still Europe, Africa, Asia, Australia, Antarctica worth of landmass on the rest of the planet that we don't see (unless the world is REALLY small, and gravity is affected by different things in the Labyrinth, or the ocean is HUGE). All this to day, how much more of the world are we not seeing, and is there civilization there, or is it all wilds? Not important to the story at hand, but interesting Lore, I'd say.
Kyfe
2024-08-06 01:54:42 +0000 UTCSuper cool! Thanks for the map as it is now (I kept mixing things up in my head). Also happy to be along for the ride!
Lynn H
2024-07-21 19:01:50 +0000 UTC
