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Tim is apologizing for being cranky; he has a canker sore that's really bothering him, and asks shadow how bad it looks. She chides him, because it's his own fault for drinking the hot chocolate while it was still scalding. The only solution now is the dreaded salt water rinse.

Zachary Platt

Wonder what they're talking about?

Stone Quillian III

If you were breathing, then yes. If you're STILL breathing then it will happen again, unil you stop.

Miowarra Tomokatu

I dont know what they're saying, but at the same time I'm quite sure I've had that same argument with someone.

Zachary Platt

"Almost" is not the same as 'You did it" except to an enraged female

Miowarra Tomokatu

😢

lee@duva

THIS is a situation hard to retrieve, note that Shadow has a "lightning" tail kink. That's extreme. This will NEVER be forgotten, even if forgiven. It will be a major error and Shadow will recall it, even forty years in the future, whenever they argue (& ALL couples argue).

Miowarra Tomokatu

He blew it. :P

But where will it go?

Does she tell him she likes him!?

Rodger L.

Thank you very much! Interestingly, this is "why don't you want to do this with me, you almost did it to her?" or "I didn’t prepare to retreat! I said today and now!" ? ;)))

Kontra

Finally she's standing up to him!

Dr Ace

I dont think will end well....for now anyway

Manuel Garcia

Yep Think Timmy Might just GOOF”D it seems then right??

Ranma( Matty)


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