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Hornets dream 28 sketch, unfinished

Heres the sneak peak for hornet 28. It is not done yet, but I wanted to at least share what I had so far since its been a few days since ive uploaded.

I'll share more soon, but im very busy at the moment. But what I can say is that this will be the second to last page for chapter 1. The next page will be Herrah's official reveal and I will be able to begin production for chapter 2.
Like always, let me know what you think!

Hornets dream 28 sketch, unfinished Hornets dream 28 sketch, unfinished

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Its not finished yet, so I don't blame you for being confused. The three are all looking out as they see Herrah who will be in the next page. My first plan was to have the last panel actually be a shot of ghost/quirrel's perspective looking at Herrah with Hornet between them. But I couldn't get it to look right, especially with the angle I had in mind. I also want to do the height comparison, but once again had some trouble getting the right shot. I will keep working on it tho.

tredih -

How did the door not break? Also for the 3rd page, is it hornet looking at Ghost and Quierell entering through the door she pass right through? It is a bit confusing to see. If so, I think the panel should show more of Hornet's body by going further out, or maybe even a heigh comparison to see truly how much Hornet has grown before reuniting with her mother.

Spalitz


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