Poll on DGA shots

Hey all!

I recently had someone make a suggestion to add a sequence to DGA. I wanted to do a poll on here to see if you guys would agree with a set of proposed edits or not, as I am going to start looking for consent before messing with scope on DGA.

The proposed edits and shots would be:
156  
- (minor edit) move Renee/Andre over so she is hit more by his chest than
shoulder at the end of the shot

157
- Renee falls under his chest rather than into her arm
- Andre takes an extra step ending above Renee before his chest swells above
- The shot cuts short as the growth happens

157.1
- Close up side shot, showing Renee reaction as the chest swells above her snout
- Andre rises again and she starts to pull back and pick herself up

157.2 (cover shot)
- Medium side shot as Renee sits up under him.
- Andre’s torso is in the frame above her, growth ripples down it
- Renees looks up and over, sees his peen in front of her face
- It starts to grow

157.3
- Close up from the side/behind of junk growing in her face
- Reaction, she gets up to leave

158
- Cut in a second or so later after current spurt
- Andre looks over as he does now, except he is looking at her
- Renee gets herself up.
- Cut from this shot before Andre steps backwards

158.1
- a medium shot of them looking at each other, Andre is rather smug
- Andres face grows as they share a moment
- Andres face goes a bit weird
- Andre starts to reposition himself as in the end of current 158.

159
-  Edit the start and timing to have Renee return to his front

092
- Remove the last third of the shot as the camera zooms out
- The peen has already grown in the rest of it.

** This is the conceptualized changes, final shots my differ once I get in there and do it.

Why make these edits?

• Its a fun and erotic addition.
• It adds more interaction between Andre and Renee, especially in the peen area
• It shows progression in the size of the peen by using Renee as a reference, especially when contrasted to shot 136
• Knocking Renee over shows an oscillation of Andre’s presence. and foreshadows a bigger invasion of her space in shot 094
• It will allow me to somewhat shift Andre’s attitude towards the sexual tension from Renee from totally oblivious to somewhat in on it, which is what I have wanted to do for a while now (I would be editing his expression in 059 too)
• I have long felt that the camera language in the part of 092 I would need to cut has not fitted in with the rest of the sequence, so it improves flow and consistency in this area.

Why not make these edits?
It is scope creep. Granted, it's in the most fun part of the sequence, but so far as inserts go, 4 new shots and edits to several existing ones is not a minor change to make. I would estimate that this would take an additional two rewards cycles to complete, above just polishing 157 and 158 as they are now. The shot changes may not be needed to significantly improve the overall experience of the animation.

So what do you guys think? I will progress as the majority wills.