Razor MG Full Version WIP #1 (Sketch Phase)
Added 2025-04-15 09:38:08 +0000 UTCMy first mg animation! Based on the Razor Mishaps chapter and I've added some extra things. I hope this post works now lmao.
I now move back to Growtober comics for the meantime before doing the next phases for the anim.
Criticism is welcome.
Full video > HERE <
Comments
thank you! Surely I will!
Devonxy
2025-04-23 16:30:25 +0000 UTCI just saw the animation, I really enjoyed watching it! And Razor is one of my faves too. Hope you animate more!
Maruten
2025-04-23 14:33:12 +0000 UTCoh gotta copy the whole link
Devonxy
2025-04-20 00:49:47 +0000 UTCI think the decryption key is invalid now
easyuki
2025-04-19 20:08:04 +0000 UTChehe possibly
Devonxy
2025-04-18 06:14:07 +0000 UTCWE need the Gorou one.. <3
Zenooo
2025-04-17 23:44:28 +0000 UTChe has the POWA
Devonxy
2025-04-16 01:50:28 +0000 UTCthank you ^^
Devonxy
2025-04-16 01:50:19 +0000 UTCin the future! I think of putting them last
Devonxy
2025-04-16 01:26:19 +0000 UTCyeah!
Devonxy
2025-04-16 01:20:40 +0000 UTCThe moment he picks up the rock... ooof. Thought he'd grow more there too haha! The drawing looks amazing there. Great animation sketch! It's turning out really promising hehehe, hope the next bit of work into it there are more bits added between each sequence so that it all flows nicely. Your work never disappoints, love your muscle and size growth! Thank you! Looking forward to Growthtober prompts!
Kekbur
2025-04-15 17:45:00 +0000 UTCI wish there was actual sound to the growth, like intense breathing, the skin stretching tighter, and the sound of picking up the boulder. Really good job otherwise though!
Talanath
2025-04-15 17:34:15 +0000 UTCAmazing work!Will it get colored in sometime future?
4ever Fancer
2025-04-15 17:13:33 +0000 UTCRazor The Buff Barbarian! 😍💪
Ciaphas Cain
2025-04-15 17:02:31 +0000 UTCaye aye
Devonxy
2025-04-15 13:38:51 +0000 UTCi love so much his poses especially the last one with spreaded lats basically hot animation but the transition from throwing the rock scene to holding a sword is a bit odd, and there could be a short sequence how he picks up a sword and puts it on his shoulder but as for the first attempt, the animations is realy great
Aiden
2025-04-15 11:57:31 +0000 UTCooh yeah i can see that. My idea was supposedly like he threw the rock as the camera panned to the sky, then cut to him with the sword. I could fix that up.
Devonxy
2025-04-15 11:32:28 +0000 UTCAlways good to see buff Razor. Animation looks really good. I agree with Simp_CEO that it could use a bit more time to 'breathe' between poses/growth. And the part with the rock seems a bit odd to me. Is Razor meant to be failing to hold it, or is the camera just panning up? Because the final shot has him just fine with the sword. But that's maybe me being nitpicky. Other than that it looks great, especially for a first animation.
Zelenal
2025-04-15 11:23:51 +0000 UTCI see I see thank you :D
Devonxy
2025-04-15 09:51:58 +0000 UTCSMASH. Holy fudge, smash so hard. Smash me. So hot. So, the animation is extremely smooth and amazing-looking. The details are also great, as is the muscle definition. In my personal opinion, it's happening a bit too fast. there should be a bit more breathing room for the process to feel more natural and desire-driven. For example, there should be a brief 1-2 second pause after he flexes his arm of chest for the first time and the grow doesnt happen. More of a "Huh? What's happening to my body?" reaction. Also, for the breathing when he does double bicep flex and plays with his pecs, he could use a more gradual de-escalation. instead of just 3 short breaths into stopping to breathe heavily. He could use a longer sigh as the last breath as he calms down for the moment of rush. Lastly, a gradual progression of growth in the muscle twiches. our back animation pacing is a nice example of the good one. you went a bit fast on the abs and core. the first few twitches should be slower and not so shaky, and the later ones can have more twitches as the muscles try to overgrow even more. TLDR: great sexy animation just a bit of the frame rate and pacing touches imo. Also can we maaaayyyybe get an NSFW version for this later on? just a though. I know you dont draw greatswords bu will still ask.
SIMP_CEO
2025-04-15 09:46:17 +0000 UTC
