Eden Academy: Topps to Bottom
Added 2023-02-01 07:00:01 +0000 UTCChapter One: The Proposal
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Awesome first chapter, Jack I can't wait for Chapter Two. Check the second to last word on page 16 fell instead of feel or felt. I hope you don't mind me pointing it out. I saw no other typos. By the way I am continuing my journey in Top Dawg. Do Gray & Archie play a part in this new adventure.
2023-02-01 10:30:23 +0000 UTCTheir belief is based on perfection, as in the Garden of Eden
2023-02-01 07:34:06 +0000 UTCQuickie, Jack. How did you come up with the name Eden?
2023-02-01 07:30:17 +0000 UTCSoooo dang good, Jack!
Steve Leonard
2023-02-01 07:12:41 +0000 UTC
