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Status update - chapter 143 part 2.

Hey everyone!

I'm just finishing off the final scene for this chapter, sorry it took a while to complete. The second half got a lot bigger than I originally intended and I had to cut some additional scenes from this one for pacing purposes. I'll wrap it up tomorrow morning, then publish it immediately afterwards. 

Speak to you again in a few hours,

Tefler

Comments

.28: Yeah, I like your sales pitch,.. they'll have it on sell at Alyssa's space trading station - And on the Halo net too,.. what do you think,.. 10K credits per 1/2 pint? more less? Or significantly less if it's some of the much weaker 'Giant John' spunk,.. i.e. 100 gallons equals around 4 pints in psychic potency,.. maybe Rachel can make some improvements,.. '-) TTFN

Michael56Smith

They should promote β€œJohn’s Juice β€œ to sell to woman in the federation. It’s an all natural drink that can heal and turn back the hands of time. No artificial ingredients and guaranteed to be effective.🀣😁😜

Tefler Fan 007

.26: ,.. but don't you think that by now, someone in the group would cum up with the notion of storing a few pints of John's magical healing spunk,.. on the ship, in the Raptor,.. on dangerous away missions,.. or maybe, it's like when the girls don't realize the changes that they have gone through until it is pointed out to them (Surprise!),.. perhaps the idea of a pre-emergency supply of John's Juice might be handy to have on hand, might need to be pointed out to them (Surprise! --again!),.. Now maybe Edraele could do it,.. 'cept this time around it was John himself that needed the Healing,.. yuck, I doubt he could swallow that! ;-) TTFN

Michael56Smith

.25: Well done Tef, quite action packed and enjoyable,.. thank you so much! ;-) TTFN

Michael56Smith

I'm really glad you enjoyed it. This one took quite a bit of working out, because there was a bunch of things happening simultaneously and I wanted to put as many of them in danger as possible to give the crew a real challenge! :)

Tefler

That was the best chapter yet for danger and the need for everyone to be involved. Brilliant!

Malcolm Rickarby

Many thianks

bigdawguw65

Love you

Toni117

are we there yet?

TF4EVA

<3 tef !

So Tomorrow morning as in Saturday or does he mean Sunday morning? Either way thanks for the update.😁😁😁😁

Tefler Fan 007

Woohoo!!!

Evan

Hey! It’s 2 days earlier than normal! Huzzah!!! Edit: My mistake, thought he posted it. It’s 12:30am for me. But this update is still awesome to hear.

DemonHunterCole

The update is most appreciated

Teun Segers

Thanks for the info! Hope all is going well!

bjcreek

This is me smiling :D

Bigfoot

great update but now i can't wait for tomorrow! Also please don't lose the cut away scenes - I'm sure they would be fascinating to see in the future. Are we there yet?????

TF4EVA

Excellent, thanks for the update

Old Salt

Joy. Thank you Tefler

rich ed

Cool

Muledrvr

yay

Cornbread

Thank you, Tefler!

Evan

W00t!!!

AmnChode

Looking forward to it

Cjmd224

Woot!

Thanks for the heads up

Kris

Joy

Yay!!!

Tony


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