Moira's Donut Machine Full (No Pop)
Added 2023-06-07 09:51:43 +0000 UTCThanks to NameTaken for the audio work!
Comments
Thank you for the feedback. Yes this one is very much made for the pop ending as that's what was requested, though I don't like posting popping on my mains, so I make no pop cuts. I'll try keep both endings in mind for the next one.
EightCookies
2023-06-09 09:10:31 +0000 UTCI like the animation, but I must say, I do not like how it ends. Mainly because it doesn’t, it just stops. It’s obvious that this animation was made with the intent to have the character pop & while I appreciate a no pop version as I despise popping, I feel as though you didn’t have any no pop ending in mind & simply cut the animation off because of that. I don’t mean to be rude or imply that you didn’t put in any effort, but I can’t help feeling that this version was made to appease those of us who don’t like popping without having any idea for ending the animation that doesn’t involve popping. One idea could be to have her shirt rip forcefully so that it sends the guy flying (an alternate pop if you will), but probably the easiest solution would have been to end the animation sooner. End it before the guy shoves his hand in Moira’s face, maybe even add a few extra seconds of her stuffed to the brim, breathing. Overall, I will say that you did an excellent job on the animation. It simply lacked a satisfying conclusion.
Patrick
2023-06-08 12:35:19 +0000 UTC
