Chapter 1
Opens on establishing shot of school.
[2:30]
[After school]
Andrea “You sure he’d be okay with this?”
Lily “Of course, just have to ask him.”
Lily finds Danny’s car.
Lily “There he is!”
Lily grabs Andrea’s hand and pulls her into a run to Danny’s car. They get to the car.
Danny “Hey, hun.”
Lily “Hiii, can Andrea come over today?
Danny “Yea, that’s fine. Do her parents know?”
Andrea “Y-yea, they’re fine with it.”
Danny “Hop in.”
Cut to them driving, Lily and Andrea are sitting in the back seat.
Andrea whispers to Lily, who is shocked by her comment. Lily playfully hits her, laughing.
Cuts to them just entering the apartment.
Danny “Well, I’ll leave you two to play together-”
Andrea interrupts. “Mr. Danny…”
Danny turns around to face Andrea, who is holding her hands to her chest.
Andrea “Can… you do something for me?”
Danny “S-sure, and just ‘Danny’ is fine.”
Andrea looks a bit nervous but gathers herself.
Andrea “Teach me sex!”
There’s a pause.
Danny “Huh? What have you guys been talking about?- No, I’m not doing that-”
Lily jumps in, grabs Danny’s hand and pulls him into the bedroom.
Lily “Just give us a second, heheh…”
Lily closes the door.
There’s a pause.
Lily “Are you mad?”
Danny “No, I’m not mad… a little- What happened today? Yesterday she hated my guts, now she wants to have s-sex with me?”
Danny sits on the bed, head in his hands.
Lily softly sits beside him.
Lily “She said she was jealous I had sex first, and I told her you’d be okay with it.”
Danny “I… don’t know, Lily. But, you’re okay with this?”
Lily “If it makes her happy, then it’s okay with me.”
Danny “That’s fine, I just don’t know-”
Lily “The day I came back to you, you said you’d give anything to make me just as happy as I made you… So please… Do this for me?”
Danny "This... would make you happy?"
Lily nods.
Danny is silent for a moment then sighs.
Cuts to the living room where Andrea is waiting. The bedroom door opens and Lily runs out. She waves to Andrea to come to the bedroom.
Andrea goes to the bedroom and closes the door.
Andrea “God, I’ve been waiting for this all day!?”
Danny “All day, huh?”
Lily “She had a vibrator inside her vagina most of the day!”
Danny has a shocked expression.
Andrea climbs onto the bed.
Danny “S-so, how do you wanna-”
Andrea jumps to Danny, locking lips and pushing him down to the sheets.
Andrea presses her body against Danny’s and starts making out with him.
POV: Andrea and Danny’s bodies bottom of frame and Lily standing up with a shocked expression, her hands covering her mouth.
Andea “How good are you gonna fuck me?”
Danny “S-so good.”
Andrea “You’ll fuck me hard, won’t ya?”
Danny “You won’t be able to walk when I’m done with you.”
Andrea “Ohh yes, I want you to break me. Punish me. Make me yours.”
Andrea sits up and removes her hoodie, revealing her black bra.
Andrea grinds against Danny’s cock, while Danny runs his hands up her body.
Andrea “Hah, I can feel all of you. Your cock is begging to me.”
Danny “It wants to unload inside of you, fill you with my cum.”
Andrea “I deserve it for being such a bad girl!”
Danny unhooks Andrea’s bra single-handed, surprising her.
Andrea “Oh, you’re good.”
Andrea goes back down on Danny while he gropes her chest and plays with her nipples.
Lily is still shocked in the background.
POV change to Lily:
Lily [He looks… so different]
Danny begins licking and sucking on Andrea’s nipples.
Lily [I’ve never heard him talk like that before]
Danny is shirtless with Andrea playing and licking his nipples.
Lily [They’re doing things I never thought about]
Andrea starts licking and kissing Danny's neck while he moans.
Lily [I’ve never heard his voice like that before…]
Andrea “You like that, Daddy?”
Danny “Y-yes, it’s… so good…”
Andrea playfully bites his neck and Danny lets out a louder moan.
Lily is overflowing with jealousy and budges in.
Lily “That’s enough! It’s my turn with him!”
Lily readies herself.
Andrea “Lily-!”
Lily bites Danny hard on the neck.
Danny “Gah! Lily!”
Danny pushes Lily away. Danny covers his bite with his hand.
Lily “D-Danny, I-”
Danny moves his hand and Lily sees the bite mark.
Lily freezes up, terrified of what she just did.
Andrea “You okay, Dan?
Lily gets off the bed and heads to the door.
Lily “I-I’m sorry, I’ll just leave you two… alone…”
Lily opens the door.
Danny “Lily-”
Lily closes the door behind her.
Exit shot of Danny and Andrea on the bed.
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