Police Officer Corrupted pt.4
Added 2022-08-19 18:00:05 +0000 UTCFemale cop goes too deep undercover and becomes a mob boss' spoiled bimbo girlfriend.
Suggested by Tsudo Nymn and voted on by all of you! Join the $10 tier to suggest your own ideas.
If you enjoyed this sequence, check out Dynamoob's take on the same prompt! I wanted to squeeze in a reference to his final outfit, was planning it for step 13, but couldn't make it look how I wanted, in the end.
At 16 images, this is my longest TF sequence ever! Loved diving deep into our protagonist's mental changes, slowly taking her from naïve goody two-shoes to spoiled mob trophy. The extra length also allowed for enough space to tell a noir tale of revenge.
Working on the story and posting it week by week reminded me of when I uploaded my very first TF sequence, Business Time, to deviantArt. In fact, unless I'm mistaken, that was my previous record-holder for longest sequence, coming in at 11 steps. Took a long time for me to surpass that!
This format was very much a Patreon experiment, so I'd love your feedback, both good and bad! Did each week's update feel meaningful? Would you like more long, narrative sequences like this in the future? Do you prefer stand-alone sequences? Please let me know!
And, once again, thank you so much for your support! This wouldn't be possible without you.
Comments
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! I think this format works well for longer, more gradual transformations.
Sortimid
2022-11-07 12:13:42 +0000 UTCWow. That was an extremely interesting sequence! Blurring the distinction between sequences and comics.
Qwalt
2022-11-07 10:54:37 +0000 UTCThanks! I agree: it was fun to combine the two
Sortimid
2022-08-22 17:33:57 +0000 UTCThis was a really fun sequence, and the slow burn works well! There's something about the combination of the "too deep undercover" and "idealistic good girl to spoiled princess" tropes that really do it for me.
Das Flute
2022-08-22 14:21:05 +0000 UTCThank you so much! Real glad you enjoyed the conclusion!
Sortimid
2022-08-21 18:35:15 +0000 UTCReally, really loved this sequence and absolutely love the idea of longer-form stories! I think you do mental changes so well and I'd really love to see more of your longer-form stuff in the future! 10/10!
themagus
2022-08-21 11:13:33 +0000 UTCYou get me, Smokey ♥ Glad you enjoyed!
Sortimid
2022-08-21 04:50:56 +0000 UTCI see what you mean. The mental changes are slow and gradual while the physical ones all happen within the final 5 steps. I considered spreading them out more, but to me this is just a story where corruption is the main focus and the physical TF is secondary to that. My first draft had steps like "I need to go shopping?! What's wrong with the clothes I have?" but it felt like such a trivial point to bring up for a character debating her very morality. And once she's ordering hits and betraying her core beliefs, taking a moment to, I dunno, highlight her new butt implants seems off, tonally. Someone else mentioned the final step feels over the top, and I think that's why: It's a bit tacked on, a treat for bimbofication fans. I wouldn't know what to do with even more steps; there's no more story left to tell. So while I agree that spreading out the juicier changes would have made this a more satisfying transformation, I couldn't find a way to do that within the story I wanted to tell. Thank you for sharing!
Sortimid
2022-08-21 04:50:08 +0000 UTCReally fun final sequence! I actually think the first step of this last sequence might be my favorite, just because of the dialogue. Her pet names for the boss and using that status to hurt other people is a really nice display of how corrupt she's become
Smokey
2022-08-20 13:33:12 +0000 UTCReally liked the twist and the pacing - until the final part. I think you established a great slow burn, then rushed some of the juicier transformations. Still a fan of your long-form, but this one would benefit from another part to even things out. Lovely art as always though!
Mr Purple
2022-08-20 11:32:13 +0000 UTCI hear you. I wanted to squeeze in a bimbo police uniform. My in-universe explanation is bedroom dress-up games. It's maybe a bit of a stretch but I feel it would be missed if I left it out. Glad you enjoyed it overall and thanks for taking the time to comment!
Sortimid
2022-08-19 23:39:20 +0000 UTCLoved it overall and think it would be great to see more long sequences. My one issue was that the final image seemed a bit over the top and a leap from the slow progress of the rest of the transformation.
Bob Bob
2022-08-19 23:32:58 +0000 UTCThanks for letting me know! Glad you enjoyed it!
Sortimid
2022-08-19 21:12:45 +0000 UTCThank you!
Sortimid
2022-08-19 21:12:27 +0000 UTCIn my mind her relationship to the Boss is public knowledge, the whole thing's just corrupted from top to bottom. I totally see the Ariana resemblance! Wasn't thinking about her, but I am a fan of the look. Went for mean spoiled princess rather than ditzy bimbo.
Sortimid
2022-08-19 21:05:07 +0000 UTCThis was a fun one, loved seeing the progress each week.
Brandon Booth
2022-08-19 20:59:35 +0000 UTCAbsolutely LOVED this!! I hope inspiration strikes again like this in the future. These corruption/unwanted-transformation arcs are my favorite!
Jav
2022-08-19 20:57:59 +0000 UTCGood stuff overall. I suppose it could be open to interpretation; I read the ending that she's still undercover but for the mob boss now (like Matt Damon's character in The Departed). Thanks for thinking of my sequence. Shame we couldn't see your rendition of the dress. Also, image 14 looks too much like Ariana Grande for me.
Dynamoob
2022-08-19 20:28:22 +0000 UTCYay! Happy to hear it!
Sortimid
2022-08-19 20:10:14 +0000 UTCThanks for letting me know!
Sortimid
2022-08-19 20:04:31 +0000 UTCInspiration just strikes sometimes, and I have to follow
Sortimid
2022-08-19 20:04:07 +0000 UTCYes! So good. I love it. To make it even better I guessed this ending. I predicted that she'd "win" against the corrupt cop and "loose" to the mob boss.
CurrentlyEatingPies
2022-08-19 19:35:09 +0000 UTCIt would be lovely to get more of this length!
itslydiabxtch
2022-08-19 19:29:04 +0000 UTCLoved it. I feel lucky that you got so into it that it became your longest work.
Tsudo Nymn
2022-08-19 19:23:40 +0000 UTCGlad you liked it! Thanks for taking the time to comment!
Sortimid
2022-08-19 18:44:47 +0000 UTCYour corruption stories are insane and long format like that allow to go deeper into the story and the change. It’s definitely a good thing.
Luffy Monkey
2022-08-19 18:42:04 +0000 UTCThanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
Sortimid
2022-08-19 18:34:33 +0000 UTCIt came out great, I’m glad she was able to get back at the corrupt chief, can’t wait to see whatever else comes next!
meepsalot
2022-08-19 18:21:22 +0000 UTCThank you!
Sortimid
2022-08-19 18:19:36 +0000 UTCSuper fun sequence! Love your corruption stories!
dino810
2022-08-19 18:02:58 +0000 UTC
