Palace of Smokeless Fire: early intro preview
Added 2025-05-21 01:34:35 +0000 UTCProgress on Palace of Smokeless Fire's intro scene. Things are coming together.
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Thank you so much! Yeah, I was originally going to have it be just a hunt for treasure, but while writing I realized I wanted the stakes to be a lot higher than just monetary gain since Sophia’s risking her life fighting the giantesses.
Hex
2025-05-21 16:53:55 +0000 UTCLooking good! I was expecting a simple "hunting for treasure" premise rather than the additional "saving the world" premise, but given how Indiana Jones-y Sophia occasionally feels, it all still feels quite appropriate, especially w/ the inclusion of an ark, lol (Also, LOVE Sophia in that uniform, she looks good in everything I swear)
Goodstrangr
2025-05-21 14:58:46 +0000 UTC
