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Added 2021-01-24 22:02:20 +0000 UTCWait...you didn't disinfect your hands!
My dear readers, a reminder - please help me correct any English spelling/semantic text mistakes if you see any. I'd be grateful :)
Comments
massive owo moment
Toby
2021-02-02 16:16:37 +0000 UTCOh no he said I'd take better care of you and I started to cry????? He probably meant it in a horny way but all I was thinking of is Herz getting love from Lunge and Lunge being a lot less angsty because he got the attention he wanted from Herz.
Bre Indigo
2021-01-24 23:20:46 +0000 UTCOh my gosh so cuuuute I'm so ready for the horny 👁️👄👁️
Tee
2021-01-24 22:57:20 +0000 UTCthanks! changed it! Sometimes I feel it myself that something's wrong but I can't tell what :) that's why I need readers like you.
Milk Assassin
2021-01-24 22:13:30 +0000 UTCHello! English reader here! The only thing I would change is taking out the second “even” in the first panel dialogue. Having two is a little bit clunky. But otherwise it’s perfect! I’m so excited to see more of this bonus comic!
Let's chill my dudes
2021-01-24 22:05:46 +0000 UTC
