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The Origin of Princess Lumina + Poem

This was the original version of the comic I made last month. I had written a small poem to add flavor to the story but almost anytime I write poetry I get self-conscious about what I write and I feel too scared to share it.

I decided to share this despite that <3

The Origin of Princess Lumina + Poem The Origin of Princess Lumina + Poem The Origin of Princess Lumina + Poem The Origin of Princess Lumina + Poem The Origin of Princess Lumina + Poem

Comments

As much as the visual storytelling alone can carry this comic, I enjoyed the poem =) It adds a little extra flavor to an already great piece~

porcelainfox

Dawwww still a great comic, and the poem makes it better

Haushagen

Thanks &lt;3

Rinzley

What I mean is that the "uncertain" is like a shapeless thing, full of risks and opportunity. By living, you mold the uncertain into a shape that's familiar and understandable. By living, you take control of the things that have no control and you make them yours :)

Rinzley

Poetry is terrifying; at least with other types of writing you can have someone proof read or beta it for you. It's a good poem. ^_^

Erin Brioche

Living gives form to the uncertain 🥺

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