A Promise Kept - Chapter 40 - The Dead
Added 2025-11-06 14:00:13 +0000 UTCA glimpse into what is to come and how the pieces are moving around the chessboard...
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I read this story and I gotta say it’s definitely a stepdown from when roses bloom, that there I gotta say was your masterpiece
Tyler smith
2025-11-30 16:56:16 +0000 UTCI do like these small showings of the antagonists being competent, e.g. Peter evading detection & Pius being nominated, however how significant these wins will affect the story remains to be seen. It's crazy when you realise in canon how stretched Dumbledore was, but still managed to engineer Voldy's defeat, having noted Sirius's struggle. Lastly, can we please stop just giving Harry everything he needs constantly, like his whole magical development has been a how-to guide from being able to globe trot to get private lessons and then getting, all of a sudden, an other worldly book (plot device) to solve the problem. Lastly, Sabine has been a pretty gd OC. I personally don't see how Gabrielle becomes involved in this story, unless the writer basically forces her into this story. Anyway, thanks for the chapter.
Sunny
2025-11-07 13:32:44 +0000 UTCI’m going to respectfully hard disagree with the previous commenter who dislikes Harry’s interactions with Sabine because personally I love them. Now I don’t think they will end up together in the end but let me tell you I wish they did, it works great in this and I love a good Harry with an OC ship.
Justaguy33
2025-11-07 05:17:59 +0000 UTC
