A Promise Kept - Chapter 35 - The Slug
Added 2025-10-19 13:00:13 +0000 UTCAnother familiar face arrives as things continue to develop...
Comments
Love the use of the dagger, I'm assuming its the Crow's from the arc with Morganna, can't wait to see what he does with it
Jake Nelson
2025-10-20 15:50:14 +0000 UTCBit of a nothing chapter for Harry tbh, but his story is of little interest to me tbh. Sirius had a good moment with Lucius, but I'm surprised the governors were so blatant with their support. Lucius is smart & could enact revenge. I actually like Sabine, not that there's anything wrong with your Gabrielle, but the former feels more fleshed out & 'real'. For someone that you've glazed previously about their Charms & Potions skills, Lily not being able to effectively use charms to defeat just 2 assailants was disappointing. Anyway, thanks for the chapter.
Sunny
2025-10-19 22:52:36 +0000 UTCMaking whispers of traveling six decades brings to mind TheSerpent...
TheNinja
2025-10-19 16:08:25 +0000 UTC
