A Promise Kept - Chapter 34 - A Proposition
Added 2025-10-16 13:00:14 +0000 UTCOnwards we go....
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I thought it was clever how you noted that the map couldn't find Jnr due to the same name, while in canon his name showing in Moody's place was a clear clue looking back. Also, I'm looking forward to the return of Filmore, with Harry getting training from the unspeakables but I don't see why Harry on his own couldn't just enter tournament himself? The whole Fawkes thing seemed out of the blue and I don't understand why there even is a connection?? With Lily, I do hope you start to flesh her out a bit. I know you mentioned that you've been building up to something and lefts hints throughout this book, but any payoff that you're hoping to achieve might not hit. Anyway, thank you for the chapter.
Sunny
2025-10-17 22:41:19 +0000 UTCThat sinister laughter brings to mind the evil version of Harry more and more teased at the end of Avalon and I don't think for one second that you have included that in this story just by coincidence.
TheNinja
2025-10-16 18:48:59 +0000 UTC
