A Promise Kept - Chapter 31 - An Outing
Added 2025-10-05 13:00:13 +0000 UTCMore developments in many ways...
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I also don't agree with Sirius decision in regards with the Dark Lord. He could disrupt their plan by snooping around and let them change base instead of waiting for things to come. But I also understand it's for the plot.
mnemnoch
2025-10-13 11:19:18 +0000 UTCI find it stupid that Sirius doesn't want to clue in Dumbledore that Voldermort is 'on the move'. True he might not be able to do much, but he's aware that Quirrell is with him anyway, so a further update that he's now in Britain - while Harry has been globe trotting around - might just be important??? I don't really care much for Harry's training, cause at this rate dudes gonna learn how to control Fiendfyre within an hour whilst doing an upside down handstand on a broom mid flight. I actually didn't mind the whole Sabine part of the chapter, as it felt more grounded than anything. Harry just being a normal teenager. Anyway, thanks for the chapter, but plz, for future stories, this mimic/horcrux absorption gimic needs to end.
Sunny
2025-10-06 16:44:07 +0000 UTCHonestly I like seeing harry finally make a decision on the matter with Sabine. Not sure I really understand it, but at least a decision was made. Their relationship is just somewhat weird to me. It doesn't feel genuine at all, its just forbid fruit with Sabine enjoying pissing off her father and Harry enjoying being with someone he knows is a bad idea. No real true feelings for each other yet, but hopefully that will change in the future. Personally, I would prefer him to be with Sabine, but I am not sure how that is realistic with the plot.
Vrail
2025-10-06 05:24:05 +0000 UTC
