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A Promise kept - Chapter 27 - A Christmas Ball

We are getting very close to the real meat of the story...

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Rita being murdered is very out of character. Doesn’t make sense at all. Otherwise, Really enjoying the story

CJ

You could choose to read something else.

TrevorTheKnight

So.... Sirius killed someone because of the possibility of what they might print on a newspaper.... OK! Also, Harry is 14.... 14, so I almost find it laughable when he's described as charming and intimidating to an adult witch. Unlike Flower, Harry had at least done rituals to accelerate his physical growth. In this story, I don't believe he's done anything of the sort like that. I do commend the author of not having majority of the chapter dedicated to praising Harry. Anyway, thank you for chapter.

Sunny


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