A Promise Kept - Chapter 26 - The Invitation
Added 2025-09-18 13:00:15 +0000 UTCMore twists and turns...and some darker ones to come...
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That's pretty much how I see it honestly. Least with some like When Roses Bloom Again was decent amount in each and detail plus connected plenty well too though whole battlefield and tactics was bit lacking.
TheNinja
2025-09-20 09:50:33 +0000 UTCThis isn’t a story, it’s a collection of one shots praising Harry. Also, far too many internal monologues and flashbacks. There isn’t enough meat in these chapters.
Ola
2025-09-20 05:41:00 +0000 UTCYeah, I'll keep reading this mainly to see how it ends, but on whole not so much a fan of it honestly. Real slow development and so far not whole heck of a lot has happened of real interest.
TheNinja
2025-09-19 10:10:26 +0000 UTCAbout same purpose as Lily. She hardly even seems to know how to fight and has merely been the weepy widow most of the time.
TheNinja
2025-09-19 10:09:20 +0000 UTCWhat is the point of him being enrolled at Ilvermorny??? It has had SO FAR no real impact on the story and merely served as a plot device. The part between Lily & Sirius was done well, as it felt more real than anything else, but other than that... this story continued with the theme of praising Harry for merely breathing in every chapter. Also, why is it that he's basically been layed up with a full study program to beat Voldermort. I mean it's nice seeing adults in the wizarding world be responsible, but I find it unrealistic for 2 heads of houses utilising much of their free time to give private tuition to a student that isn't theres??? Anyway, thank you for the chaptrr.
Sunny
2025-09-19 06:53:01 +0000 UTC
